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Poet Destroyer Vs Jamesgareth

Poet Destroyer vs. James Gareth

Are you done taking your nap?
I read a few of your poems
You got it wrong, they are not crap
First I want to thank you, for the extra lap
Glad, I inspired another slam out of you
I'm not ready to toss in the cap
It takes a bigger plot to get me upset
Your ego fell into my poetic trap
While you came out of the closet,
wearing M.C. Hammer pants 
Your headstone now reads "You lost it!"
The vulture's on your body tap, tap, tap!
On your corpse, they pile up their  crap
"Sorry!" I zapped you with my taser gun, 
zap, zap, zap!
That's what you got for raising your pen.
You hit me with words, like a gypsy queen
Don't want to be enemies, nor friend.
You say I am sweet like a flower.
No magic cure, no poetic power.
I can be as sweet as they come.
If by any chance you are the jealous one.

I'll tell you what,
does it matter if I kiss the ladies butt?
It's not your fault you are not hot.
I'll wait for you to leave the kitchen,
The heat in here is what you don't get.
Hang up your gloves, put away your pen.
Your words of yesterday, slowly rot.

I will take your Hakius.
Release them like creatures.
They sound like insults to Mother Nature.

What if? I turned over a new leaf
Will you stop saying, I'm the crooked police!
I will no longer be an investigator.
I have no need to destroy you.
I have no force like Darth Vader.
I'm kind of getting bored of this
I will read you later alligator.
         "I'll be back!"
As The Terminator once said


(FUN) No feelings were hurt in the making.
If you are following
(read poem by JAMES GARETH--To the POET Destroyer)

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Christian Alexander March 24, 2021 at 8:13 PM Rad. Nice to see you on the front page. (:

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 14, 2016 at 1:16 PM Very intriguing poet faceoff like Marquis-MC said. I like, PD. A straight ghetto guy like me, how could I not. I have to read James to see who I think won. But just on the strength of knowing a bit about your unrelenting style, I'll give it up to you, PD. Nice floating/stinging style you got there. Keep 'em coming. Keep loving and living, sharing and giving. Much love to you, dear.

Cynthia Jones January 11, 2015 at 2:10 PM There's a poetry site I go to, where a friend and myself used to do this. She's not in the site anymore though. :OS I don't know where she is. Anyway, fantastic write. Made me smile. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Maurice Yvonne September 10, 2014 at 8:29 PM Oh darn that's what I hate about being ROBIN. I just got a run in my tights.

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2014 at 10:33 PM hey, what ever happened to that James Gareth? do you know, PD? Hope you enjoyed a father's day with your significant other!!! Luv, Andrea

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 12, 2013 at 1:05 PM A little "poet-beef" here I see. I didn't know it was like that on "the soup" LOL! I was going to ask why you're called the "Poet Destroyer" -well I'm not challenging you! HA!

Sheri Fresonke Harper April 26, 2013 at 7:15 PM Excellent poem PD, fun take on a challenge poem

Laura Breidenthal April 22, 2013 at 10:09 PM This must have been fun!! Great one. Always, Laura

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 1, 2013 at 5:24 PM Dear Linda, My eye sight is not what it use to be I read part 2 before I read this one. I am going to read James' slam to YOU. This is a fun contest but as of now I do not know James. I'm on YOUR side (I like being a Winner) Soup Mail Reply LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Harry Horsman December 14, 2012 at 4:41 AM another wonder PD, yours and James Collab works wonders here...

Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 8:07 AM It's so fun to read this one my sisie! Such naughtiness in here, lol. It shows strength! I really love it. Ok, thanks for sharing. I'll read more next time. Love much, sisie-pooh, Leo

Justin Bordner July 24, 2012 at 12:02 PM Quite a cantankerous combat PD.- a lovely conquest;you should not be toyed with! What would the censors think!HA!!! A deadly but generous Sphinx you are - "only you can destroy Love...", "headstones,vultures,slaps...",Oh lord,is there no mercy? With respect - J.A.B.

Dakarai Cobb June 11, 2010 at 1:46 PM you make friends quick.lol.glad i found you before you slammed me. you would have hurt my feelings.lol.

Billy Thekidster April 14, 2010 at 11:18 AM Why you poet destroyer you? You told me you were just a beginer. I think I've been had here folks. I think what we have here is a SLAMMMMING ringer. I haven't forgotten you P D. Your Slam To You Will Come Very Soon From Me. Best Wishes Always My Poet Destroyer Friend. Looking foward to Slammming with you to no friggin end. Bill (theKidster)

Lynette Chachere March 29, 2010 at 9:41 PM lol.raising your pen.nice one. haha. never quit writing. -Always&Forever Lynette

Jay Loveless March 29, 2010 at 5:49 AM (: I love this, its funny, and def reminds me of 8 mile haha. but really awesome job. xoxo Always, Rain

Royal Trevino March 28, 2010 at 9:35 PM fun... good combat.. be back soon i'm craving the read lol

Bathsheba Bathsheba March 28, 2010 at 5:38 AM Love your attitude PD - I will check out James Gareth right now and report back for duty - Fab share as always -:)

John Beam March 27, 2010 at 5:40 PM thanks for comment alot of reading here on soup hope you find what you are looking for if anything

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2010 at 3:12 PM AHA, you struck back. YOu guys are GOOD and funny as heck!! Gareth, I like your response below here, and PD some of your lines here are extra hilarious. Trying to imagine Gareth in MC rapper pants. Hmmm, does he have a picture here at the soup to help me out? I can't recall. LOVE this. Is my soup(mail) ready yet? LUv,Andrea

Doris Culverhouse March 27, 2010 at 1:01 PM cute poem, funny stuff here!!

Skat A March 27, 2010 at 12:21 PM James on the bottom of me . I am enjoying this, now I will go read your poem. This is like A slam out of no where. I am likeing this . I am gonna tell my daughter to support this round. James you Just got knocked down.. Loving it.

Gareth James March 27, 2010 at 11:42 AM lol!!! PD, thank you!! It'll take me a while to come back at this one!!! I feel like i'm on 8 mile!! Right, i'm getting out my special Parker Pen...with a fountain tip!! So....Watch out PD!!!