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“Some poems look like they fell down a flight of stairs, one word per step at a time.” - Attributed to Billy Collins 
“Poetry should not require snakes and ladders to read and follow the syntax.” - Author
“Some poets take ‘line breaks’ as congo line dancing.” - Author
"Linger-longer and wait-a-while are colloquial names for Rainforest vines i Australia that slow hikers" - Author

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poesy curse of hanging fruit strings

poesy curse of hanging fruit strings a pool topped up to the brim will spill over to endless drips of drivel slops
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:08 PM
interesting write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Anderson Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 9:17 AM
Thanks for the feedback, humbled by the efforts of the others!!
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Creative one John. Very nice. Congratulations! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, John
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Sara K
Anderson Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Yeah love the pendant. Cheers
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