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Cascading through my mind deluge of dreams floods of fantasy rivers of reverie torrents of thoughts vapours of visions waterfalls of words In folios of verse

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Constance La France

Date: 12/14/2019 9:17:00 AM

Brian, love this, going to my favs !

Brian Strand
Date: 12/14/2019 9:34:00 AM

Cheers Constance,&many thanks for the epulaeryu placing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2011 5:12:00 PM

This is very cool the way you used a cascade of differing yet similar words to envision poetry. Congrats on your well deserved win, Brian.

Christopher Bunton

Date: 12/20/2011 11:26:00 AM

I like this! Good Job!

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/19/2011 12:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2011 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/18/2011 3:30:00 PM

yes, yes, sometimes I look back through the pages and think? who the heck wrote this?? wince? LOL..blush? Congrad's Light & Love

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/16/2011 3:34:00 PM

Wonderful thoughts cascading in your mind Brian. Thank you for my placement in your 2-12 line contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 7:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Brian. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol