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Any type of poem I write Breaks my mind of the Concrete that it sits in Delivering myself a headache that Erodes my brain which often Finds me with nothing to Gestate into a creation of write that is Hidden among the muddled words and letters Into a form no particular order, Juggling in an attempt to gain sense of the muddle I Keep within my head, I soon Learn that My poetry skills are limited. Noticeably it shows as amaturish, if Only I had the abilities to Piece together words into something that might Qualify me as a form of poet. Reading back Something That I have created Undermining myself with little Value Wondering if an X-ray of what is inside my mind would reveal Yodels of verse that Zig zags erractically inside 14th August 2020

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 9/2/2020 8:50:00 AM

Your peotry skills are excellent, Emilia! Your write from your heart.

Emilia James
Date: 9/3/2020 2:39:00 AM

Thank you Franci for your kind words and encouragement, Emilia x : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/31/2020 5:39:00 PM

I think this. Speak the truth. Be you. Be genuine. That trumps form. You just wrote a poem of utter clarity. For me, that Is exciting. I don't need the window dressing of "form." I prefer the poet, as is. Sober, and not trying to intoxicate...nor suffocate me with gibberish. From across the pond~~~ Pangie xx Feel free to check out any of my 1,400 poems just over a year.))

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 8:34:00 AM

Thank you Pangie, I cannot be anything else but myself, some may like that some may not. I most certainly will be checking out your poems and look forward to reading them. Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment...sending big hugs from across the pond Emilia xx

James Inman

Date: 8/29/2020 6:43:00 AM

Self doubt is a theme that many Poets share and one of the reasons we post on sights like this in the hope that someone will find a fragment of beauty in what we write and will offer a bit of encouragement. Nice write.

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 8:16:00 AM

Thank you James : )

Ricky Muse

Date: 8/14/2020 4:37:00 PM

I would dare to say this poem speaks for many. Thanks for sharing............peace!

Emilia James
Date: 8/19/2020 4:28:00 AM

Thank you Ricky for your comment. I have a lot to learn and I do enjoy every part of it. Regards Emilia