Poem On a Rainy Day

The day is grey 
and my hair is changing
to that nice color 
Making it through another day 
I hope to stay healthy 
The years roll on 
As does the New York City subway 
So do the Mets
The everlovin' Mets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 9:31 PM
This is an interesting perspective on the passage of time, and the analogies to the NYC subway and the Mets. Nicely done! All my best, :) Bartholomew
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:00 AM
I like this one too, but please, grey as a nice color?? hahaha (I wish I could get my roots to stay colored)
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