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Poem of My Dream

A tender discourse of artistic thoughts Ambles my mind searching for prologue Aiming to become a poetic dialogue, Striving for words that elicit a response. And you enter with an aiding portrayal Letting my words live and breathe, To evolve into lines of synchronic rhythm And emanate sounds of lyrical music. And you tell me words must be set free To hear as I hear, and feel as I do: Joy of romance or sorrow of heartbreak, Elation of birth, or anguish of death. Words set free weave a cohesive likeness Choosing a dawn or night of darkness, Painting a world full of cheer or fear Upon shiny meadows or wispy pastures. Shedding limitations of form and syllables, Guided only by poetic aspirations You awaken me with a wondrous theme, You think so big, poem of my dream! October 27, 2017 Placed first in standard contest #138 by Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/22/2018 3:50:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/21/2018 7:31:00 PM

"You think so big, poem of my dream!" This thought alone curls softly around me. It sounds like someone has lifted you to the skies. Just being near, lingering in your lullabies. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2018 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

L. J. Carber

Date: 11/21/2018 9:13:00 AM

Interesting poem, Vijay-- congrats on your win in Brian's contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2018 8:20:00 AM

Thank you L. J.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2017 10:29:00 AM

WoW! Fantastic musings, Vijay. A beautifully expressed poem. Elegant imagery. Solar bright write. Love and peace always, my dear friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Freddie!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2017 10:30:00 AM

Btw ... great title. Love and joy forever.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/31/2017 2:29:00 AM

Nicely done... beautiful words

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2017 6:52:00 AM

Thank you Pashang!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2017 3:25:00 PM

I was thinking you were describing a muse, but your muse can and WILL bring the poem of your dream, indeed, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/30/2017 8:55:00 AM

Beautiful and impressive ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Probir!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2017 5:10:00 PM

vijay, your words enthrall... keep on dreaming!...much enjoyed!.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2017 5:43:00 PM

Thank you nette!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/28/2017 3:24:00 PM

As I read your dream becomes a reality. It dives into your very soul and finds the words of your hearts desiring. Thank you for sharing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2017 5:42:00 PM

Thank you Patricia!

Roy Pett

Date: 10/28/2017 9:06:00 AM

Excellently written poem as usual Vijay, a joy to read. :))

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2017 10:28:00 AM

Thanks Roy!

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/28/2017 12:16:00 AM

Poets strive to find the perfect words to elicit a response, and you have done this with a compelling pen, Vijay. The poem of your dreams is working in you, guiding you always. You are amazing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you Becca--appreciate your lovely comments!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2017 9:20:00 PM

Beautifully expressed this write truly is! You have amazed me by this incredible poem, so full of your clever words of wisdom and amazement! I surely loved reading your powerful piece this evening! What a fabulous write my friend! Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2017 9:25:00 PM

Thank you Russell..appreciate your comments as always!