Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Poem of My Dream

A tender discourse of artistic thoughts
Ambles my mind searching for prologue
Aiming to become a poetic dialogue,
Striving for words that elicit a response.

And you enter with an aiding portrayal
Letting my words live and breathe,
To evolve into lines of synchronic rhythm
And emanate sounds of lyrical music.

And you tell me words must be set free
To hear as I hear, and feel as I do:
Joy of romance or sorrow of heartbreak,
Elation of birth, or anguish of death.

Words set free weave a cohesive likeness
Choosing a dawn or night of darkness,
Painting a world full of cheer or fear
Upon shiny meadows or wispy pastures.

Shedding limitations of form and syllables,
Guided only by poetic aspirations
You awaken me with a wondrous theme,
You think so big, poem of my dream!

October 27, 2017
Placed first in standard contest #138 by Brian Strand

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Line Gauthier November 22, 2018 at 3:50 PM Congrats on your top win, Vijay. Well done.

Brandy Nicole November 21, 2018 at 7:31 PM "You think so big, poem of my dream!" This thought alone curls softly around me. It sounds like someone has lifted you to the skies. Just being near, lingering in your lullabies. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit November 22, 2018 at 8:20 AM Thank you Brandy.

L. J. Carber November 21, 2018 at 9:13 AM Interesting poem, Vijay-- congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Vijay Pandit November 22, 2018 at 8:20 AM Thank you L. J.

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2017 at 10:29 AM WoW! Fantastic musings, Vijay. A beautifully expressed poem. Elegant imagery. Solar bright write. Love and peace always, my dear friend. Vijay Pandit October 31, 2017 at 11:06 AM Thank you Freddie! Freddie Robinson Jr. October 31, 2017 at 10:30 AM Btw ... great title. Love and joy forever.

Pashang Salehi October 31, 2017 at 2:29 AM Nicely done... beautiful words Vijay Pandit October 31, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thank you Pashang!

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2017 at 3:25 PM I was thinking you were describing a muse, but your muse can and WILL bring the poem of your dream, indeed, Vijay. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2017 at 4:29 PM Thank you Andrea!

Probir Gupta October 30, 2017 at 8:55 AM Beautiful and impressive ... Vijay Pandit October 30, 2017 at 11:22 AM Thank you Probir!

Nette Onclaud October 28, 2017 at 5:10 PM vijay, your words enthrall... keep on dreaming!...much enjoyed!.. huggs Vijay Pandit October 28, 2017 at 5:43 PM Thank you nette!

Patricia Cresswell October 28, 2017 at 3:24 PM As I read your dream becomes a reality. It dives into your very soul and finds the words of your hearts desiring. Thank you for sharing. Vijay Pandit October 28, 2017 at 5:42 PM Thank you Patricia!

Roy Pett October 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM Excellently written poem as usual Vijay, a joy to read. :)) Vijay Pandit October 28, 2017 at 10:28 AM Thanks Roy!

Becca Teagan October 28, 2017 at 12:16 AM Poets strive to find the perfect words to elicit a response, and you have done this with a compelling pen, Vijay. The poem of your dreams is working in you, guiding you always. You are amazing. Vijay Pandit October 28, 2017 at 7:10 AM Thank you Becca--appreciate your lovely comments!

Russell Sivey October 27, 2017 at 9:20 PM Beautifully expressed this write truly is! You have amazed me by this incredible poem, so full of your clever words of wisdom and amazement! I surely loved reading your powerful piece this evening! What a fabulous write my friend! Great Work!! Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 9:25 PM Thank you Russell..appreciate your comments as always!

James Swartz October 27, 2017 at 8:38 PM Great piece Vijay! You do know how to weave words and set them free. Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 9:24 PM Thank you James!

Susan Ashley October 27, 2017 at 3:20 PM A fantastic write Vijay. Well written and expressed as always! Enjoyed! Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 3:52 PM Thank you Susan--always a joy to read your comments!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 27, 2017 at 2:11 PM A wonderful penning, love that last stanza :) Bless! xomo Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 3:49 PM Thank you Maureen--appreciate your comments!

Heidi Sands October 27, 2017 at 2:03 PM This is excellent Vijay! A masterful creative poem :) Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 3:49 PM Glad to see you back--thank you Heidi!

Arturo Michael October 27, 2017 at 1:47 PM You've found the greatest lover of all...The question will always be how much you love her... Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 3:48 PM Thank you Arturo!