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Poem of a Memory

For you are like a summer rose
against the wind your face unfolds
nothing there is like nature chose
for the memory one remoulds,
golden sunrise upon the morn
captures the diamond on the dew
nature revels in fragrance worn
scented hint of florescent hue.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2012

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John Posey Date: 6/19/2013 3:34:00 PM Congrats, Harry. genius is compressed into this short, powerful, yet tender entry... Jake Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 6/19/2013 1:13:00 PM Love this harry and well deserving of a top spot, well done xx Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 6/19/2013 11:11:00 AM Absolutely awesome Harry...Perfect rhythm and flow....Love your description of how the sunrise 'captures diamonds on the dew'...Congratulations - Tim Login to Reply

Julie Heckman Date: 6/19/2013 10:44:00 AM very nice Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/19/2013 9:55:00 AM congrats on a fine win Harry Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/19/2013 9:51:00 AM Hi Harry, I'd like to say ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/19/2013 9:16:00 AM HARRY MY DEAREST FAVORITE POET. , ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

David Scott Date: 9/21/2012 11:29:00 AM HUE INTRESTING WORD MORN IVE USED ALOT NICE WRITE AND VISUALISATION THANKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE SHE KNOWS NOT ONE OF MY BEST THIS IS ACTUALLY PART 2 TO SHE DONT KNOW WHICH IS BETTER DAVIODSCOTT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/19/2012 9:17:00 PM Gotta come back and fave this one, Harry!! Login to Reply

Michael Smith Date: 9/19/2012 4:42:00 PM Like the sutlties of each verse. Login to Reply

Ralph Mason Date: 9/19/2012 2:30:00 PM very good! especially the last two lines. I'm picking up your sent. warm thoughts, Ralph Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 9/19/2012 1:00:00 PM Harry; the beauty of this poem is - that when a women reads it - it is like it was written especially for her. Thanks for sharing and for reading - Not A poem. Lucilla Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 9/19/2012 7:53:00 AM Last two lines are wonderfully concluded the poem. Loved always my sweet friend, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/19/2012 7:08:00 AM VERY beautiful, Harry. You are one of the most sparkling of the gems at Soup. Login to Reply

Anthony Nutter Date: 9/19/2012 3:57:00 AM Beautiful write Harry; your talent is showing in this one Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/19/2012 2:57:00 AM soup xx Login to Reply

Chidozie Uche O. Date: 9/19/2012 1:35:00 AM You never find it difficult to come back in all your lines, old times Harry maybe your shared ties with the great writers of the world-- what am I trying to say-- description and use of imagery, so authentic you could draw it anywhere. Playing with nature as if you created them-- powerful imagination like William words. Enjoyed...... Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 9/18/2012 10:46:00 PM good on ya Harry, ol mate, sweet of verse, just first rate, keep writing, great hobby too, disentangles brain, it do... Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 9/18/2012 10:31:00 PM Loved it very much indeed! Very well written, and what a nice memory, very well described! Thanks for sharing. Caroline. Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 9/18/2012 10:22:00 PM Fantastic imagery Harry; I can not recall ever knowing such visual & metaphoric affluence in so few words - you have utilized traditional symbols in very atypical formulas which is a terament to mastery - ' against the wind your face unfolds... ' simply rich in enchantment - J.A.B. % Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 9/18/2012 7:22:00 PM Short, sweet, and very pretty. Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 9/18/2012 6:22:00 PM spoken like a true poet Harry... nniiiiicccccce Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/18/2012 3:44:00 PM Thank you Harry, very much for the exciting comment. I like your poem of memory. I can feel the definition and structure of this memory. You painted a fine picture in my mind. Nature, how ever so wonderful. Always looking forward to your visit. These last 3 days, I have found time to sneak in so many comments, and read up on many contest winners. Just in case you are here, I'm inviting you over to my latest blog.. A happy " HI " would be nice.. xox~ ALWAYS~ PD Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 9/18/2012 3:24:00 PM Why do you resent the summer rose. Just kidding, Brenda obviously left off the p on the word present. It's just funny how the meaning can be quite different with a typo. A flower delicate and pure. Survives the wind, awaits a cure. The sun and rain revive her new. To greet each day with the morning dew. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/18/2012 3:22:00 PM ROMANCE WITH ELEGANT RHYME HARRY LUV .. ENCHANTING LINES ENRAPTURE MY HEART .. I AM SUCH A ROMANTIC .. THANKXXX FOR YOUR PRECIOUA WORDS OF SWEET COMMENTS .. OH RON HAD A GOOD LAUGH TOO .. HE IS SO FUNNY WHEN HIS ITALIAN TEMPER ISN'T APOUTING LIKE A WHALE ..HAHA Login to Reply

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