Poem of a Memory

Congrats, Harry. genius is compressed into this short, powerful, yet tender entry... Jake

Love this harry and well deserving of a top spot, well done xx

Absolutely awesome Harry...Perfect rhythm and flow....Love your description of how the sunrise 'captures diamonds on the dew'...Congratulations - Tim

very nice

congrats on a fine win Harry

Hi Harry, I'd like to say ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA

HARRY MY DEAREST FAVORITE POET. , ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~

HUE INTRESTING WORD MORN IVE USED ALOT NICE WRITE AND VISUALISATION THANKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE SHE KNOWS NOT ONE OF MY BEST THIS IS ACTUALLY PART 2 TO SHE DONT KNOW WHICH IS BETTER DAVIODSCOTT

Gotta come back and fave this one, Harry!!

Like the sutlties of each verse.

very good! especially the last two lines. I'm picking up your sent. warm thoughts, Ralph

Harry; the beauty of this poem is - that when a women reads it - it is like it was written especially for her. Thanks for sharing and for reading - Not A poem. Lucilla

Last two lines are wonderfully concluded the poem. Loved always my sweet friend, bl

VERY beautiful, Harry. You are one of the most sparkling of the gems at Soup.

Beautiful write Harry; your talent is showing in this one

soup xx

You never find it difficult to come back in all your lines, old times Harry maybe your shared ties with the great writers of the world-- what am I trying to say-- description and use of imagery, so authentic you could draw it anywhere. Playing with nature as if you created them-- powerful imagination like William words. Enjoyed......

good on ya Harry, ol mate, sweet of verse, just first rate, keep writing, great hobby too, disentangles brain, it do...

Loved it very much indeed! Very well written, and what a nice memory, very well described! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Fantastic imagery Harry; I can not recall ever knowing such visual & metaphoric affluence in so few words - you have utilized traditional symbols in very atypical formulas which is a terament to mastery - ' against the wind your face unfolds... ' simply rich in enchantment - J.A.B. %

Short, sweet, and very pretty.

spoken like a true poet Harry... nniiiiicccccce

Thank you Harry, very much for the exciting comment. I like your poem of memory. I can feel the definition and structure of this memory. You painted a fine picture in my mind. Nature, how ever so wonderful. Always looking forward to your visit. These last 3 days, I have found time to sneak in so many comments, and read up on many contest winners. Just in case you are here, I'm inviting you over to my latest blog.. A happy " HI " would be nice.. xox~ ALWAYS~ PD

Why do you resent the summer rose. Just kidding, Brenda obviously left off the p on the word present. It's just funny how the meaning can be quite different with a typo. A flower delicate and pure. Survives the wind, awaits a cure. The sun and rain revive her new. To greet each day with the morning dew.

ROMANCE WITH ELEGANT RHYME HARRY LUV .. ENCHANTING LINES ENRAPTURE MY HEART .. I AM SUCH A ROMANTIC .. THANKXXX FOR YOUR PRECIOUA WORDS OF SWEET COMMENTS .. OH RON HAD A GOOD LAUGH TOO .. HE IS SO FUNNY WHEN HIS ITALIAN TEMPER ISN'T APOUTING LIKE A WHALE ..HAHA