Poem Noir

Like many, I masqueraded in shades of urban gray.
I offered my love to the midnight neon angel.
I walked the caliginous streets alone and astray.
She remained distant, alluring, always disdainful.

I courted cynicism, resignation, and despair as my style.
I wore tilted fedoras in smoke-filled reeking bars.
I feigned culture and literacy, trying to look worthwhile.
I blush now, recalling my see-through shooting stars.

Like many, I was just a child renting a man’s body.
I impersonated adulthood with stylized gloom.
I thought maturity was an act, so mine was shoddy.
I donned trench coats, my affectation in any room.

My blinking street angel had seen it all before.
My love for her was simulation and nothing more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Eslinger Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 9:20 PM
OMG, I think this is stunning. Nice to see I wasn’t alone in trying phases of character With things becoming real as the acts or trials flew farther from the genuine calling of my soul. Blessings to your blinking angel? May God’s grace be with you this Christmas!
Wells Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 5:00 PM
Hi Sally, I would have replied sooner if my profile settings had not been mysteriously changed. I think your interpretation of the poem nails it exactly! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
Eslinger Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 9:19 PM
OMG, I think this is stunning. Nice to see I wasn’t alone in trying phases of character With things becoming real as the acts or trials flew farther from the genuine calling of my soul. Blessings to your blinking angel? May God’s grace be with you this Christmas!
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