Poem is Like Music

BiteSize Poetry Contest no121 // Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Contest Judged:  9/1/2025 1:49:00 PM
( 3rd Place )

Written: August 20, 2025


Each word a note, a quiet song,
lines rise and fall where hearts belong.
Pauses hum as loudly as the sound,
meaning dances, turning all around.
Rhythm threads through every heartbeat
and soul and melody at last meet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Romios Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Hi Rowena, I so agree with you. I love to sing. However most songs rhyme, i cannot sing without rhyme. My Mon started reading poens to me whe I was three. after that game, the music of World War II and music with more rhyme all I’m trying to say is I tend to write and rhyme a lot? For me to write in free, almost impossible, but I do it on occasion.. yours is delightful.yet lyrical.Cool! Pangie whxx aggressive
M  Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Oh my what a beautifu sweet poem Rowena….just lovely…Debx
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet words. Big hugs
Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:12 PM
Nice Lyric poetry, Rowena. I like it, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! I’m really glad you enjoyed it. Hugs back!
Wolf Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Just like? -- Yours are even better. Enchanting magic, Rowena! Thanks, gw
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Wow, thank you! Your encouragement keeps the magic flowing. Big thanks and hugs!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 4:34 PM
I agree, poems are like music for our souls. Writing is an act of faith and creativity just like writing and playing music is. Outstanding!!** hugs, Sara
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:42 AM
I couldn’t agree more, poetry really is music for the soul. Thank you for your kind words. Big hugs back!
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:38 PM
Very lovely poem! A favorite!
Velasco Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Thank you .
Fleming Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Very nice, Rowena. :) john
Velasco Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:27 PM
Thanks John.
Messina Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Rowena, indeed, poems are like music, music to our eyes...a waltz at its finest! An enjoyable read:)
Velasco Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Thank you so much! I love the idea of poems as a waltz- graceful, flowing, and full of rhythm.
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