Poem In Progress

The perfect poetry
is not what are we writing
but what are we living
as a poem in progress
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gifford Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:16 AM
Hi, I liked your poem about living our poems. How true! ~~Darlene
George Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:07 AM
thanks Darlene!!!
A  Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 12:16 AM
you've given so much to this poem. Everyday, life can be written as poetry. :) A big 7 SKAT
George Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:15 AM
SKAT, our own lives may be the most beautiful poem . lives as you write, write as you live, like a poem in progress. GG
La France Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Gitlan, true words, I am a poem in progress, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, where the bluebirds sing
George Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:18 AM
the pleasure was mine! many thnaks!!! ;)
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:30 PM
wise words indeed:-) hugs jan xx
George Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 8:19 AM
girls girls already you have overwhelmed! :)) many thanks for all of you!!! :*
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