Poem From An 8th Grader With a Crush Contest

Dear Michael,

As I sit daily in back of you
I find myself melting into my seat
I have noticed you are fairly new
I anticipate the day we formally meet.

I heard you moved here to live with your dad
And that you live on the block next to mine
I was hoping my note would make you glad
I admire your smile at lunch when it shines.

I want you to know that this class can get mean
Especially with those punks in the third row
I advise you if you join a sports team
They will stop their comments and respect you so.

Since the 8th grade dance is very soon
I was wondering if you had a date
I have English with you at a quarter to noon
Please write back I will certainly wait.

By: Sabina Nicole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/16/2012 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sabina! So cute!! Blessiings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 12:59:00 AM
NIce one, congratulations Sabina xx
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:32:00 AM
congrats Sabina on a fabulous win for this sweet luv note luv..
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:53:00 AM
very nice,, congrats on your win in my contest... Michael.... such a sweet write
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/15/2012 7:29:00 PM
well your my 8th grade crush :)
Date: 4/14/2012 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sabina!!! Well Done!! :D big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:13:00 AM
Ha ha ha ha...There be a dozen eighth graders responding to this, Sabina! How fun!...Gotta get dibs on the new guy b4 all the other 8th grade gurls!...Great write for this contest...I just whipped up something this morning. :) Gwendolen
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/6/2012 8:19:00 AM
Thats right baby!!! lol
Date: 4/5/2012 11:05:00 PM
ok, who is it??? Why am I the only one that named a name? hahaha. Lots of cute shy folks around here!!
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/6/2012 8:20:00 AM
why should i put a name?
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