Poem From An 8th Grader With a Crush Contest

Dear Michael,

As I sit daily in back of you
I find myself melting into my seat
I have noticed you are fairly new
I anticipate the day we formally meet.

I heard you moved here to live with your dad
And that you live on the block next to mine
I was hoping my note would make you glad
I admire your smile at lunch when it shines.

I want you to know that this class can get mean
Especially with those punks in the third row
I advise you if you join a sports team
They will stop their comments and respect you so.

Since the 8th grade dance is very soon
I was wondering if you had a date
I have English with you at a quarter to noon
Please write back I will certainly wait.

By: Sabina Nicole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on your win, Sabina! So cute!! Blessiings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 12:59 AM
NIce one, congratulations Sabina xx
Sweetheart Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:32 AM
congrats Sabina on a fabulous win for this sweet luv note luv..
Falotico Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 7:53 AM
very nice,, congrats on your win in my contest... Michael.... such a sweet write
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:29 PM
well your my 8th grade crush :)
Burch Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Sabina!!! Well Done!! :D big hugs,love deb
Song Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Ha ha ha ha...There be a dozen eighth graders responding to this, Sabina! How fun!...Gotta get dibs on the new guy b4 all the other 8th grade gurls!...Great write for this contest...I just whipped up something this morning. :) Gwendolen
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Thats right baby!!! lol
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 11:05 PM
ok, who is it??? Why am I the only one that named a name? hahaha. Lots of cute shy folks around here!!
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 8:20 AM
why should i put a name?
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