Poem For a Sleeping Child

There’s a wish to wander in your cool innocence
and cruise the thoughttides of no
responsibility—so easily you wipe your
shoeless feet on the ever waiting door
mat of socialization. How can I help you keep your 
tender "souls" intact—your tread from
wearing thin out of align so as not to
fall flat. Your easy grace put to an 
unfair test of ill-will winds blowing
carelessly at your soft back. I long for your sweet
calm at rest so deep so empty filled with
solid happiness—you know you are loved 
beyond any measure that’s human or infinite. If
I could walk with you for a moment and peek
quietly at your conscience-----but no-it's yours  
and no Dooleys allowed. Forgive me to 
want to intrude on your ever pleasant play-would you
share with me like the kernel of rice or
squashed raisin-I might, but only if we all
can go. Keep it hold it for as long as you
can-as it suddenly disappears without a trace
never to be found again lest you become your 
own sondaughter and learn to bask on 
the outside looking in—---and be content. I 
will live to never intrude on your soulspace,
but will always knock first. I am sorry ahead 
of time for any pain I cause—for my mat 
was torn treaded , muddy and ragged—my
sleep had no wanting witness. But I promise
to watch over you      all ways.

Dave Collins. Song, Poem for a sleeping child, music to write by, Kevin Ubanks. Best read if listening to the suggested music. Spring 1991.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ashley Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Dear Dave, your poetic gem is filled with tender beauty and your word-play is delightful. Congratulations for your excellent win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ligon Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Dave! Great idea of setting your poem to music.
Gentry Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your win with this very expressive and tender poem!
Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:33 AM
A real heartfelt poem Dave! Congratulations! :) -HANS
A  Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Dave, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:16 AM
Greetings Dave. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Hi Dave, Congratulations on your "Heartfelt poem." Take Care ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Loving this win again Dave... SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 5:14 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Gasun Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 12:44 PM
A very beautiful poem this is my dear friend Dave. Thank u so much for sharing and many congratulations on your great win! love and big hugs, Leonora
Ali Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 12:32 AM
It is such a joy to watch a child sleep and you've put in words all the thoughts that go through a loving parent's mind. congratulations and best wishes All ways!!!
Mehta Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 9:40 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win, Dave
Richards Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 2:48 PM
This is so softly gentle.....so beautiful, just a lovely poem! congrats to you....wonderful win!!
Posey Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Just what every parent would like to say to their child....congratulations on your win.... Jake
Jones Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Enjoyed your winning poem..congratulations..nice job..
Gasun Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 12:13 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend. Thank you so much as well for sharing your excellent write. Have a grace-filled wkend! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
A  Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:23 PM
Congrats....SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:12 PM
congrats on win Shadow x smiles
A   Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 9:16 PM
a nice winning poem LINDA
D. Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:11 PM
congratulations "NATE
Posey Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 6:41 PM
This is more than most children can hope for... Devotion is the key to raising children. They can recognize, very quickly, anything less than sincere.... I find great Love, Wisdom, and Devotion in your work.... Jake
A  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:38 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
Eastman Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Congratulations on the win. Well done.
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, DAVE... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 11:28 AM
Impressive! Congrats on your win. AO
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