Poem Emily Style

I heard a fly buzz by - when I died
The air stale - and - bitter
Voices heavy - thoughts many
I gaze to the ceiling and watch the fly buzz overhead
I closed my eyes- final peace
- Eternity -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 20, 2009 at 1:20 PM
Super poem Adrian, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Outstanding poem Adrian. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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July 17, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Yes, in the end, we hope for eternal peace. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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July 17, 2009 at 3:19 PM
Interesting poem, thought...
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