Matthew Anish Poet Concrete

Poem About a Kibbutz

Visited Lavi 
   A religious kibbutz 
Where they had a nice hotel 
   I saw the cows they were raising 
And ate some tasty food
    That was on my ten day trip to Israel 
The Holy Land!
  Politics there is different 
       than the politics in the U.S.A. 
         Does this work seem like prose 
    Well it is meant to be a poem 
          so comment on it!

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Andrea Dietrich December 13, 2018 at 8:05 PM It's funny how you inserted a message to Soup members in the ending. I too did about 5 to 10 days in Israel on a Bible tour that took us all over that country. I even ate camel meat there, not knowing it at the time. It was pretty good.When did you go there?

Connie Marcum Wong December 9, 2018 at 6:25 PM An amazing visit to Israel....a holyland I have only seen in movies and documentaries. Lucky you! It would be an adventure of a lifetime....and I have traveled much Matthew, but never there. I enjoyed your poem! Happy Hanukkah and holidays my friend. : ) xxoo Matthew Anish December 9, 2018 at 6:54 PM I would like to travel more but ill health may prevent me. I had a good day today. I went to a postcard show - I often write about them - for money! Also I attended a concert of Yiddish songs. All in all an interesting day. Thanks so much for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish