Poem

A poem
is a heavenly gift of Winter
gliding down as white stars
showing off uniqueness
in exquisite patterns
and taste
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Poem

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Ghildiyal Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 4:11 AM
GREAT WORK.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:55 PM
So then this invented form of yours is like an Acrostic without the constraints? I think I understand what you want. Some of the example links did not work. I enjoyed your poem Vermillion! Best of luck with your form. PS is a great place to introduce your form. Happy holidays! : )
Scythe Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Not necessarily like an Acrostic. Although, in my preferences, it is. The objective is to create a visual description of what a word means to you.
Buck Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Mr. Scythe: I hope after you've "read around a little" your thoughts of poetry never change. However: I might warn you none of mine contain exquisite patterns or taste. :o) Many that you find here will fit your pattern exactly. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Dillon Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 2:27 PM
love what you've done here :)
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