Poem

I’m gonna re-write my story
Write it in bold letters on iron tablets
See, the past has been reeling me in too many times
Spiraling me inside it’s vortex like a helpless leaf in a storm.

Nights of tearful contemplations, breathless internal fights
Disclosing and admitting fears embedded within me,
Tonight I’m re-writing my story.

See, I may not have started out clean cut and definite, pre-meditated.
I may not have been of good stock
But I look upon the stereotypes with aghast.
For now the small bits and pieces have been stitched together-
And reinforced with strong seams.

Yeah, I may not spell and say words correctly.
I may not put together colors alright,
But inside; The colors match, the words make sense
Tonight, I loosen this rope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

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Agustin Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 26, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Ciss G, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 4, 2016 at 2:34 PM
CISS, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Yamin Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 11:50 AM
Ciss, This is an enchanting write -well presented thoughts with appropriate imagery. I am impressed. Thanks also for reading my poem The Gardener and for your appreciation. -Mohammad
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December 5, 2008 at 10:47 AM
Lovely poem...im not good at commenting people's poems because i caint realy put out what i realy fill you know? so i just realy love your poem it speeks to me some how....Love:Joanie
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