Poe Tree

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I stood on a rocky shoal, regret lingering on my mind Its fingers traced blood-filled lines along my bare arm as if brittle veins in leaves, fallen from their tree I was not blind to fear or its impending threat of harm Whispers like the breath of death washed over me Brief the moment seemed to be between light and dark Shadows cast then fluttered in ebon depth of night Twas foretold a tale of danger, imminent and stark Pale moon risen, silvered orb stared at me from high A cyclops beast waited to feast when time was right Scarecrow in a fallow field, on his arms there perched ravens who then danced on his head, raucously calling Death rode on a pale horse and scavengers took flight Fierce, my fright when from the sky, red eyes lurched I stared in disbelief, knowing I'd no chance of stalling Barren branches of leafless trees, maudlin limbs frowned at me with forlorn face of a grim poet, Poe My weak knees trembled; eyes filled to the brim Frozen with terror, deprived of taking a last breath, 'twas not snow made me shiver; an ill wind did blow Brisk the Winter chill when murder of crow took to air after beady eyes sent a warning glance my way An eclipse veiled the moon; and I, gripped with despair, heard their caws, despite my flaws, denied Poe my soul At water's edge I escaped death's claws on a rocky shoal

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Date: 5/14/2023 12:16:00 AM
Wow, this sends shivers up my spine as much as Poe's writings ever have, and I love it!! I also love the art you shared to highlight your magnificent write! Faving it :)
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Date: 5/13/2023 8:30:00 PM
I think that I have never read a thing // as haunting as a Poe Tree! Bravo, Lin!
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Date: 5/11/2023 4:51:00 PM
Lin, love your Poe inspired dark poem and your play on words title, superb!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/11/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thanks ever so sincerely, Tania.
Date: 5/11/2023 4:51:00 PM
Densely packed with all the familiar imagery of Poe, dark, mysterious and clutching. A great write Lin, as if you entered his mind and tip toed out with a cache of dark treasures.
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Date: 5/11/2023 5:09:00 PM
That’s a bit frightening, Paul. I’m just kidding. Every now and then I hold a pen as he did and this drawing handed it to me. Thanks so very much for the great compliments.
Date: 5/11/2023 11:54:00 AM
I really like this poem, my only thought after reading was "She should have saved this for Halloween"...dark brooding edgy poetry...
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/11/2023 12:14:00 PM
lol Frederic, I'll just write another! Thanks so much.
Date: 5/11/2023 8:41:00 AM
A haunting piece indeed Lin….very much enjoyed! Debx
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:51:00 AM
Good afternoon to you, Deb. Thanks a bunch.
Date: 5/11/2023 7:45:00 AM
Brilliant Lin your Poe tree has outgrown itself here, dark, moody, and gloomy, I agree with Daniel below, Poe could not have done this one better himself, I’m gonna fav this haunting piece, cheers David
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for acknowledging my tree’s growth spurt, David. He has deep roots that feed on crow dung. I appreciate the fave as well.
Date: 5/11/2023 6:06:00 AM
Poe could not have done better himself, Lin. Did you escape, really?
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Date: 5/11/2023 6:16:00 AM
I escaped to write about it, Danny. Thanks for the compliment.
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