pocket watch

Dad's old pocket watch... aureate, fine, glistening... his time on my hands

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I Am Anaya

Date: 4/18/2025 11:17:00 AM

You've inherited a part of him, treasured dearly! Easter blessings ~Anaya

Jim Healey
Date: 4/18/2025 12:45:00 PM

Thank you, Anaya. Happy Easter. Take care. J.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2025 11:09:00 PM

Outstanding ku here!

Jim Healey
Date: 4/18/2025 8:08:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Happy Easter.

Charles Coon

Date: 4/17/2025 8:55:00 PM

Nice..!!

Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 9:08:00 PM

Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2025 6:40:00 PM

Beautiful!

Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 9:07:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 4/17/2025 4:57:00 PM

Great last line, Very nicely done

Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 5:01:00 PM

Thank you very much. I have had Dad’s watch for many years now. I still feel a connection to him whenever I see and hold it.