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Dad's old pocket watch... aureate, fine, glistening... his time on my hands

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Date: 4/18/2025 11:17:00 AM
You've inherited a part of him, treasured dearly! Easter blessings ~Anaya
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/18/2025 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya. Happy Easter. Take care. J.
Date: 4/17/2025 11:09:00 PM
Outstanding ku here!
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/18/2025 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Happy Easter.
Date: 4/17/2025 8:55:00 PM
Nice..!!
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 9:08:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/17/2025 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 4/17/2025 4:57:00 PM
Great last line, Very nicely done
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Jim Healey
Date: 4/17/2025 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much. I have had Dad’s watch for many years now. I still feel a connection to him whenever I see and hold it.

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