pocket watch

Dad's old pocket watch...
aureate, fine, glistening...
his time on my hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Anaya Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 11:17 AM
You've inherited a part of him, treasured dearly! Easter blessings ~Anaya
Healey Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, Anaya. Happy Easter. Take care. J.
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 11:09 PM
Outstanding ku here!
Healey Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:08 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Happy Easter.
Coon Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 8:55 PM
Nice..!!
Healey Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 9:08 PM
Thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 6:40 PM
Beautiful!
Healey Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Kim.
May Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Great last line, Very nicely done
Healey Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 5:01 PM
Thank you very much. I have had Dad’s watch for many years now. I still feel a connection to him whenever I see and hold it.
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