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Pnoy

A new hope arose To save us from woes Bad one was gone No laments, none It's time to be up on our toes. He has so much to do Clean up muck, dirt, poo That the bad left behind When they robbed the poor blind Gotta start, no ado. So we're cheering him on And pray the job gets done But our cheering falls short If we don't give support Till the battle is won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 4:30:00 AM
like this peace here my friend duncan
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Date: 10/22/2010 7:24:00 PM
Cheering along with you, Ely :)! Happy to see another Pinoy on board over here-- and I hope you'll enjoy Poetry Soup as much as I do (gotta warn you, this site is very addictive!) --really enjoyed how much hope you put in here and yet you also mention of how we also must do our share in making our country move forward-- we have been stagnant far too long-- it's time we wake up-- PNoy definitely has his hands full but we can definitely do our part--nikko :)
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Dr. Ram, Linda-Marie, and Anthony. I chanced upon poetrysoup yesterday and thought I need to go back to my poetry-writing roots from so many years ago! I have a lot of poetry-reading to do ahead! :-) God bless.
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:44:00 AM
Very awesome write on the poor blind man robbed, Ely
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:07:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today and its creative theme.. check out the contest page offered to new members.. and good luck with luv...
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:07:00 AM
Intriguing write, nice job
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