Pm Light Through My Blinds

"P.M. LIGHT THROUGH MY LIGHTS"


alone in this house 
alone in this darkness 
the water runs
the fridge hums
the footsteps from
my feet echo
my breathing is a 
sonic boom
the rays of light through 
my blinds upon my wall
alone in this house
with words so few
it's all I need to 
know.


By: Chicano Eddie
752017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 22, 2017 at 6:35 AM
the poem made me feel large and powerful - but like a awake warrior - ready for the night
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