Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Plummy

after the rainfall
treetops weep dusk's purple tears
goodbye to golden
some days should last forever
because they were that perfect

like the latest dawn
when hot pink sun sat on rose
apricot in hue
and later I found my love
in the evening's plum shadows

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Quoth Theraven January 21, 2021 at 9:31 PM Evelyn, Wonderful treetops. Your rains fall in a perfect place called forever. -Richard Evelyn Judy Buehler January 22, 2021 at 2:33 PM So glad you found it refreshing. Thank you so much. :=) Evelyn

Juliet Ligon January 21, 2021 at 12:46 PM As beautiful as the stage. Evelyn Judy Buehler January 21, 2021 at 4:04 PM I appreciate the kind compliment. :=)

Victor Buhagiar January 20, 2021 at 11:04 PM Very romantic. Your visions of nature are always vivid. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler January 21, 2021 at 7:52 AM Thank you, Victor. :=)

Alexis Y. January 20, 2021 at 5:44 PM Hi Evelyn, I enjoy reading your poems; they always have good content and imagery. Your descriptions are so spot on. Great to see a touch of romance as well. Have a great evening:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler January 20, 2021 at 7:18 PM Hi Alexis, Your appreciative insights are wonderful to read. I am glad I added a touch of romance, since you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for all the nice things you had to say. You have a great evening, too :=) Evelyn