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Jack Horner was an impish little boy, who lived on Cherry Orchard farm; That produced varieties of fruit. For a mellowing sun, kept groves warm. The Horners had always been a serious set-no nonsense, like spring rain; And tried to teach their son responsibility, like time's jewels that remain. But, alas, it was a big challenge, with hilarious grasshoppers in the hall! Sent early to bed, he laughed long, the way you only laugh, when small. Friends came face-to-face on fun Fridays, as February fled into summer, When far fetched flowers were fashioned, dashing gardens in deep color. Four o'clocks were finally abloom, when fabled family paid fulfilling visits, Amidst fleeting, flexible colors of summer, that changed by the minutes. Jack lived in the house of loving rules, like all seasons returning, punctual; Or like dusky night and clashing day, knowing never to overstay, is crucial! Sage spring delighted the senses, on their street of showy, sweet William. So golden were red butterfly days, but fully aware the plum dusk, will come. Naughty nightingales sang all day, when neighbors were brought by noon, In the noticing hours of beautiful nature, like evening dark, noticing moon. Passion flowers adored romantic stars, and coniferous 'wollemia' grew tall; Very rare, and called a living fossil, like memory rich portraits, in the hall. 'Chinese long beans' grew up to three feet tall, as Saguaro cacti grew aged; And 'prickly pear' bloomed so lovely, like teal sky, where rainbow is painted. Jack's parents gave him a plum tree to nurture, so he'd get a sense of duty; And Jack followed his parents advice carefully, hoping it would be a beauty. Feeling important, while doing important work, Jack felt real joy and pride; Like sun drifting from quick silver, rain clouds, with no more cause to hide. Time's vain, idle fancy visited lives; enriching them, as it did in days of old. Soon, three plummy years had passed, due to a yellow sun's, heart of gold. Jack's plum tree grew tall and so beautiful, rivaling all of the stately others. Having become thoughtful and responsible, he now realized nature's colors! That Christmas, the family relished fruit pies, bearing fruit from Jack's tree, On a day wrought for love and smiles, like dream becoming sacred reality. Little Jack Horner sat in a corner, Eating his Christmas pie; He put in his thumb, and pulled out a plum, And said, “What a good boy am I!”

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Date: 12/26/2024 12:55:00 AM
Dear evelyn, you always leave me in awe of your rhymes and how you play around with words, giving and exciting and fun touch, with such exquisite alliterations! Naughty nightingales is a clever line i thought was unique! And i also love the flow and rhythm of every word woven here in such a seamless and rhythmic manner! Another poem that left me in awe! You really are a gifted soul! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/26/2024 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for expressing your appreciation, with graciousness, evoking smiles that linger long. Very best wishes, my friend.
Date: 12/22/2024 9:01:00 PM
It's cute. I liked this story as a child. You've done a creative retelling that is interesting.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/23/2024 8:17:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to bring smiles to my day, with your positive remarks. Wishing you a blessed Christmas, Evelyn
Date: 12/22/2024 3:44:00 PM
What a sweet buildup to the fanciful rhyme we all know so well! You are a good story teller
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/22/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you for the joy of your very pleasant remarks, Andrea. Blessings. :)
Date: 12/22/2024 7:43:00 AM
Christmas pies are popular at this time of the year. You use sweet fruit and various plants to build up your poem. Very imaginative. Merry Christmas.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/22/2024 1:30:00 PM
Thank you very much for your thoughts. Such pleasure to read your comment today. Warmest Christmas wishes. :)
Date: 12/21/2024 7:55:00 AM
Your poem is an alternative version of the traditional nursery rhyme, offering a more detailed, reflective narrative that explores themes of responsibility, personal growth, and the passage of time. Through rich imagery and a playful tone, it underscores the beauty of nature as both a nurturing force and a teacher. The character of Jack Horner is transformed from a mischievous child into someone who learns the value of hard work and responsibility, symbolized by his care for his plum tree.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2024 4:54:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your thoughtful, positive remarks, Silent One. Your words inspire and delight. I hope your Christmas is wonderful. :)
Date: 12/21/2024 6:54:00 AM
so touching and beautiful "story", i love plums, even at Christmas, thanks for the delicious poem evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gladdening remarks, Yann. Merry Christmas! :)
Date: 12/20/2024 9:48:00 PM
A very imaginative set of couplets Evelyn, filled with sound, imagery and the taste brought to the minds eye and all set to the beautiful, ageless, Christmas. Thank you for the treat and Let me Wish you and your family a Merry Christmas, with lovely colours, aromas and the taste of Christmas delicacies - Hugs Maria
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2024 4:44:00 PM
Maria, I deeply appreciate your thoughtful, warm comments, and your kind Christmas greetings. I wish you and yours a blessed holiday season, as well. Hugs Evelyn :)
Date: 12/20/2024 8:23:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative side Evelyn of another twist on the famous Little Jack Horner Rhyme. Creating a spectacular story and theme from this rhyme as always lovely to read with your unique thoughts and influence in the story that make the story wonderful to read. God bless you and thanks for sharing...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/20/2024 9:44:00 PM
It's such great news that you enjoyed this story, Michael. Thank you very much for your gracious compliments. Many blessings. :)
Date: 12/20/2024 7:18:00 PM
Sent early to bed, he laughed long, the way you only laugh, when small...delightful…red butterfly days, plum dusk… coniferous 'wollemia…all such fun!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/20/2024 9:41:00 PM
I'm thrilled that you had fun reading this tale, Kim. Thank you for your kind expressions. Blessings. :)

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