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Plucking Time

Falling…falling autumnal leaves twirled and coiled on pale of deepened trees; night’s solstice graces wise age pondering on youth’s flames... gentle breeze, be kind when moons request for last hours throbbing wild! Late June Standard Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:31:00 PM

Nette,, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:27:00 PM

Lovely win Nette.... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/21/2013 10:26:00 AM

Lovely!! Congrats on your winning nonet, Nette! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2013 8:57:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/19/2013 11:52:00 AM

You prettied age up nicely. Thanks. Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2013 1:41:00 AM

this one is fantastic, Nette. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 6:28:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest, Kiran

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 6:27:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest, nette

Len Gasun

Date: 10/11/2013 11:17:00 PM

Coming back on your poetry page to read more of your outstanding poem/s my dear friend Nette. This is very creative & soo beautiful. Loving and enjoying it much. By the way, I hope the weather will be better 'till tom. for the show. I remember the 1st time you were in our dear friend's show you told me, it was raining.:))) But, rain or shine, I know you can do it very well. So proud of u!!! Biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2013 6:34:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Very creative..Thanks for the visit to my page..Still haven't finished that one..A lot going on right now..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/10/2013 11:52:00 PM

Beautiful as always! I never tire of reading your poetry. Gail is right, your poems are art. Love and blessings, Rhonda

Donna Jones

Date: 10/10/2013 10:35:00 PM

Falling twirled and looped..dancing leaves...such a beauty nette....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/10/2013 9:40:00 AM

You are the princess of all things natural. Another lovely breathy piece.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/10/2013 8:46:00 AM

hi Nette super nonet lovely flow to it Shadow x smile

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/10/2013 8:25:00 AM

It's almost like you sung a song on the equinox of Fall. Absolutely gorgeous.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/10/2013 7:59:00 AM

I love the moonlight laying on the changing leaves of the fall, such a beautiful sight! The moonlight on anything is gorgeous in my opinion! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!