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plucking grapes along the lane

my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . the chatter of birds my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . the sun sets purple my sisters and I plucking grapes along the lane. . . mom’s call to supper

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Date: 5/16/2015 11:41:00 AM
you are a good haiku-ist Andrea
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:39:00 AM
Love the poem , I was once sat in a tavern in Cyprus , Not far from Aphrodite's beach When the owner said , Help yourself to grapes . I looked at him as if he had forgotten to put the grapes out , Above your head he pointed. there were grape vines all around the place and I'd gone there every night for two weeks and not noticed , Too busy watching the Greek dancers
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:05:00 PM
Nice series of haiku. love phyl
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Date: 5/15/2013 6:29:00 AM
I love haiku because is synthetic although not simple. This one is impressive. My sincere compliments
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Date: 5/12/2013 1:40:00 PM
The line 'plucking grapes along the lane' makes me feel so at ease and summery. Way to go, Andrea. Lovely. -Jeremy
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:07:00 PM
Shades of Mogen David! Good stuff, Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 5/8/2013 3:17:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valued..Sara
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:39:00 AM
you are very good at this form. I don't know why it is so difficult for me. This will do very well.
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Date: 5/7/2013 11:30:00 PM
You are quite "purple" these days! It's very lighthearted and I know when I as younger at my grandma's place, I would spend a tremendous amount of time picking fruit. It never got old :) Best of luck!
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Date: 5/7/2013 1:51:00 PM
And the winner is: Dandy Andie! (appause, whistles) Another 'juicy' gem my friend and I assume you plucked only well ripened ones and no 'sour' grapes?...I will stop this nonsense now
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 5/7/2013 2:02:00 PM
And I'm quite certain this is getting on your nerves, but PLEASE don't subject me to your 'Grapes of Wrath' (Help me I can't stop)
Date: 5/7/2013 11:56:00 AM
Hidden beauty of grapes adorned with the sequence of love. Thanks......, Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/7/2013 10:18:00 AM
A paridisal picture of perfection. With Mothers day approaching, makes a nice tribute. Hope you have a wonderful one. Peace. :)
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Date: 5/7/2013 7:47:00 AM
Very nice. I especially like the repeats with different cutting line for each haiku. They are simple yet evocative. It should do well in the contest. Jack
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Date: 5/7/2013 7:27:00 AM
Love the image! It reminds me of my bothers and I picking dewberries on the fencerow.
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Date: 5/7/2013 2:33:00 AM
Nice imagery! Like it :)
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Date: 5/6/2013 3:20:00 PM
Now this is what I call a plucky little poem lol. it's going into my faves this one is. I just love that line, 'Plucking grapes along the lane', A mood swing line for me. Lovely poem as well. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:54:00 AM
Best wishes Andrea~A.O
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:18:00 AM
Andrea nicely done for this contest. Sweet grapes don't they smell delicious. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on mine. Hugs and smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:31:00 PM
A sweet entry Andrea. My laprop keeps freezing. Sure hope kaspersky can fix it.
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:43:00 PM
Hmm..a 'fruitful' contest entry for you I hope Andrea, I liked the family aspect.. good one; Joe..)
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:06:00 PM
Andrea...this is lovely....good luck....
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:38:00 PM
love these, Andrea - congrats on your wins
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:03:00 PM
sounds like a lovely memory...
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Date: 5/5/2013 2:59:00 PM
I see you've chimed in with a poem for this interesting contest! I was awaiting your entry, and was wondering if you were going to write one...and this was worth the wait! You do know how to balance intrigue and a certain kind of complexity within this creative write my friend! I'm again impressed with another glorious poem by you Andrea! I'm glad I got to read this one, much better than my entry I must say, might be that they are just different! What a awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/5/2013 1:55:00 PM
Nice poem about grapes. I love to eat them, Watching TV. Thanks for sharing. Good luck i the contest.
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