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PLUCK courage against odds righteous balancing prepared to fight bullies snake cleverness, dove wisdom “With keen weapons love defends” 9/7/2020 Joseph May’s Pyramids Contest

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/11/2020 7:44:00 AM

'Courage against odds' with 'snake cleverness and dove wisdom'. Beautiful. Good luck Kim! Linda

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Linda!

John Watt

Date: 9/7/2020 11:39:00 PM

Love your pyramid poem, Kim. It inspires one to take courage against the evil forces around us. I like the phrase 'righteous balancing' and your allusion to Matt 10:16. Grace and peace ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2020 3:10:00 AM

Thank you, John! Grace and peace to you also.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/7/2020 2:25:00 PM

This is a really solid pyramid... You could have been an advisor to Ramses II. lol. Makes me want to withdraw mine and write a better one! G.L. in the contest. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:44:00 PM

LOL! To think of Ramses as taking advice from me...you know some how or another it would be fake news ;)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/7/2020 11:00:00 AM

A well-structured and well-defined pyramid!! A great piece for the contest!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 12:26:00 PM

Thank you, Newton!