Pluck

PLUCK
courage
against odds

righteous balancing
prepared to fight bullies
snake cleverness, dove wisdom

“With keen weapons love defends”


9/7/2020
Joseph May’s Pyramids Contest

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Linda Alice Fowler

September 11, 2020 at 7:44 AM

'Courage against odds' with 'snake cleverness and dove wisdom'. Beautiful. Good luck Kim! Linda

Kim Rodrigues

September 11, 2020 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, Linda!

John Watt

September 7, 2020 at 11:39 PM

Love your pyramid poem, Kim. It inspires one to take courage against the evil forces around us. I like the phrase 'righteous balancing' and your allusion to Matt 10:16. Grace and peace ~ John

Kim Rodrigues

September 8, 2020 at 3:10 AM

Thank you, John! Grace and peace to you also.

Gershon Wolf

September 7, 2020 at 2:25 PM

This is a really solid pyramid... You could have been an advisor to Ramses II. lol. Makes me want to withdraw mine and write a better one! G.L. in the contest. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

September 7, 2020 at 2:44 PM

LOL! To think of Ramses as taking advice from me...you know some how or another it would be fake news ;)