Home » Poems » Thomas Clark » Plenty More Fish In the Sea

Plenty More Fish In the Sea

they said don,t you cry she,s no worth it 
there,s  plenty more fish in the sea
yet here i am i,m still  crying
cos  what good are fishes to me

i once was a really good fisherman
i had more than 1 fish in my net
but its true what they saythe one that gets away
is the one that  you never forget

lovelight verse

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

April Gabriella

August 24, 2013 at 11:37 PM

I agree with That Archaic Poet, this does need polishing. But the sentiment is great and I love what you have going on in the first stanza.

Just That Archaic Poet

August 24, 2013 at 4:03 PM

Hi, Thomas. I'm not really sure if the commas in the contractions are intentional or not; they throw me off a bit. In your first line, you need to edit "no" to "not". You have a really good piece going here but it needs some polishing. I think you should rework the last line. I'm also not sure if you meant for the "I's" to be lower case. I would also rework the second line of the second stanza. The last two lines are awesome; they anchor it together. With some polishing you will have a good poem

Just That Archaic Poet

August 24, 2013 at 4:05 PM

*I mean you should rework the last line of the first stanza. I like the sentiment in this piece :)

Plenty More Fish In the Sea

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources