Pledged Love

Our love, like the touch of a bee upon a flower,
One kiss is like a snowflake touching my lip.
Our passion like a breeze after a warm shower,
Your touch is as the taste of one sweet wine sip.

Your breath is as warm as a summer’s first breeze.
Your caresses are soft and tender as a downy feather.
Desires of your touch raises my temperature in degrees,
Unity ignites our bodies’ heat like tropical weather.

When apart I ache like a fierce winter storm.
Just hearing your voice, seals memories of zeal,
Holding your hand brings life to my living form.
Each passing minute, I pledge your heart to steal.

Our passion secured by every moment in time.
My loving words I have pledged to you in rhyme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 26, 2008 at 12:50 PM
beautiful, enough said, take care D-nyce
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August 16, 2008 at 4:19 AM
Cecil, this is a beautifully written pledge of love. written in excellent sonnet form, I love the smoothe tone of the imagery as it presents itself to the reader, :-) A truly captivating read. Thank you for sharing. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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August 13, 2008 at 7:16 AM
Now this is more upbeat. God Bless. Vince
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August 12, 2008 at 2:25 PM
Beautiful words of devotion to your loved one. Reading them was a rememberance of things possible. It was a lovely poem.
Foulk Avatar
August 12, 2008 at 1:45 PM
like the way you compare our love like the touch of a bee upon a flower. very moving, touching, warm line that catches your attention. nice write. thank you for reading my Love Faded away and for your comment
Winter Avatar
August 12, 2008 at 5:44 AM
Wow. Awesome love poem here. This is filled with raw and honest emotion. Just crazy about your passionate descriptions and your enthusiasm for this love. Love, shar
Jordan Avatar
August 12, 2008 at 12:55 AM
And you have done an excellent job with your pledge - excellent Sonnet - God Bless
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