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Pleasures of Reading

It pleasures me
That she reads me
Inside her serenity
Parked on our bench of antiquities

I, whom gazes over there at her,
Later in the dusk of candlelight
Shall remove her pink dress
Tiss then
I shall see she derives her pleasures
As I read her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 3:45 PM
beautiful as it reads,
Bangalee Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 3:06 AM
it's beautiful-she reads me, Inside her serenity///
Duet Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Ooowee! Such a seductive poem...I like it!! Carole
Lindley Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 9:18 AM
The pleasures multiplies greater than tenfold when both are reading in the same bed my friend and with deliberate intent to gift joy to their bed-partner. Romantic and sensual poem that inspires images of love and pleasure.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Hello Arthur, nice to meet you. I just finished reading your poetry. I like the way the words flow. I like this poem.
Deschler Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 6:35 PM
A beautiful poem, Arthur, and quite romantic... Indeed, a joy to read!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Classic write Arthur, I love the line: 'Parked on our bench of antiquities' says so much --- super ending as well! Keith
Bateman Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Hello Arthur, Most Excellent my good friend and, I agree with the other comments below, very sensual. A FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Duet Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Nice one...especially when you "read" between the lines. Carole
B. Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:16 PM
I agree with everyone that this is a very sensual write! A fav.
Sergi Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Reading each other sans libra will overcome the sense of words to a sensual urge. Great Write, Arthur!
Chircop Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Oh Arthur this somehow feels like Im intruding into a sensual beautiful moments between two..so close...A definite fave.
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 8:17 AM
- Relaxing ... a lovely poem, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise hugs!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:29 AM
Wow such a sensual and beautiful piece of writing. As if a dream, she reads me...and how that feels when I have the opportunity to really read her. This was gorgeous Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:43 PM
Thanks Chris, so nice of you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Arthur, your lines of what pleases a women is insightful in this sensuous, tasteful beauty. I love it. A fave for me! 7 ; )
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Oh Connie thats so sweet of you!!! Hugs!
White Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:45 PM
It is a pleasure to read you, reading in every sense is the very act of discovering. Thank you
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Thanks Darren much appreciated!
Gupta Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Indeed pleasurable readings ... comforts of feeling ...
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Thank you so much Probir!
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