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Pleasures of Reading

It pleasures me
That she reads me
Inside her serenity
Parked on our bench of antiquities

I, whom gazes over there at her,
Later in the dusk of candlelight
Shall remove her pink dress
Tiss then
I shall see she derives her pleasures
As I read her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/16/2019 3:45:00 PM
beautiful as it reads,
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Date: 4/16/2019 3:06:00 AM
it's beautiful-she reads me, Inside her serenity///
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Date: 12/13/2016 3:22:00 AM
Ooowee! Such a seductive poem...I like it!! Carole
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:18:00 AM
The pleasures multiplies greater than tenfold when both are reading in the same bed my friend and with deliberate intent to gift joy to their bed-partner. Romantic and sensual poem that inspires images of love and pleasure.
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Date: 12/8/2016 6:58:00 PM
Hello Arthur, nice to meet you. I just finished reading your poetry. I like the way the words flow. I like this poem.
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Date: 11/16/2016 6:35:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Arthur, and quite romantic... Indeed, a joy to read!
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Date: 11/16/2016 1:05:00 PM
Classic write Arthur, I love the line: 'Parked on our bench of antiquities' says so much --- super ending as well! Keith
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Date: 11/16/2016 9:21:00 AM
Hello Arthur, Most Excellent my good friend and, I agree with the other comments below, very sensual. A FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/15/2016 11:39:00 PM
Nice one...especially when you "read" between the lines. Carole
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Date: 11/15/2016 7:27:00 PM
Now that is a book worth reading! Well expressed Arthur. My friend Steve would really like this one.
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Date: 11/15/2016 5:16:00 PM
I agree with everyone that this is a very sensual write! A fav.
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Date: 11/15/2016 1:05:00 PM
Reading each other sans libra will overcome the sense of words to a sensual urge. Great Write, Arthur!
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Date: 11/15/2016 10:47:00 AM
Oh Arthur this somehow feels like Im intruding into a sensual beautiful moments between two..so close...A definite fave.
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Date: 11/15/2016 8:17:00 AM
- Relaxing ... a lovely poem, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2016 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise hugs!
Date: 11/15/2016 7:29:00 AM
Wow such a sensual and beautiful piece of writing. As if a dream, she reads me...and how that feels when I have the opportunity to really read her. This was gorgeous Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2016 11:43:00 PM
Thanks Chris, so nice of you!
Date: 11/15/2016 2:15:00 AM
Arthur, your lines of what pleases a women is insightful in this sensuous, tasteful beauty. I love it. A fave for me! 7 ; )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2016 11:42:00 PM
Oh Connie thats so sweet of you!!! Hugs!
Date: 11/14/2016 11:45:00 PM
It is a pleasure to read you, reading in every sense is the very act of discovering. Thank you
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2016 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Darren much appreciated!
Date: 11/14/2016 11:21:00 PM
Indeed pleasurable readings ... comforts of feeling ...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Probir!
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