Pleasure's No Treasure


	     Why do I move swiftly on
                 from ‘Eureka’ moments
              Can I not stop to celebrate
                 Why not savor them

              The motor keeps running
                 momentum must be maintained
              Pleasure's no treasure
                  leaning back ~ a heart attack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 3:46 PM
even now I forget to savor the moments and slow down...my brain thinks I'm still 55
Lawless Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 6:42 AM
Walked by bee hive yesterday. the bees were pollen-waiting...
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:23 PM
Bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Crandall Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 6:56 PM
Take time to savor the small victories!
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:24 PM
Good advice. ~ Your Eeka
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Hello Gershon, A person must learn not to work too hard. If pushed too fr a heart attack could occur. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 11:06 AM
Hello Gershon, Yes constipation can be replaced by the Hershey squirts. Enjoy your day my frinend, /Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:29 PM
Or even worse: His constipation might be replaced by the 'Hershey Squirts."
Rolland Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 6:28 AM
this is inspiring, i am afraid of heart attack, quite surprising and interesting poem, dear poet, enjoyed
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Don't be afraid, Yann. Then you'll 'lose heart.'
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