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Pleasure Becomes a Pain - a Tribute To Lord Byron

( The poem is based on the biographical details with quotes of Lord Byron the renaissance poet. The poem is Stand By Me appeal to the criticism of Byron being an outspoken, atheist and passionate poet)



By accident his left leg was twisted
Mary nursed it though he resisted.
A day came when Mary died and
Her dying words about him were at the end 
“All for the love of the child, she nursed in lieu”
He said then, “I can put on a simple shoe”

He asked himself, “Why should I weep?
Her matchless spirit sweeps
In the shade of her bower
I remember the hours
We shall meet
In this rural retreat
Now we will see each other no more
One last look what we were before”

Pleasure became a pain to him
At the sight of people’s screams.

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January 21, 2015
Form: Rhyme
Fifth Place win
Contest: Stand By Me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 16, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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February 15, 2015 at 10:18 PM
:) SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Dr Mehta :-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:24 PM
It was nice to see this great entry from my "Stand By Me" contest. I enjoyed it once again, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
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February 1, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Dr Ram:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
Belcher Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram! What a great tribute.
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Nicely done, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 10:02 AM
This is a wonderful poem to honor this amazing poet. Congratulations Dr. Ram!
Relish Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Wonderful tribute... congrats on the win...
Deschler Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 7:42 PM
None of us are perfect and those who can except us for who we are, are the only friends we will ever need... A very noble tribute to one of the poetic greats, Lord Byron. Well done, Dr. Ram! Congrats on the win!
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Great tribute - many congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Any tribute to Lord Byron is favored by me as he is my favorite poet. Well written Dr. Ram!
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January 21, 2015 at 4:00 PM
One of your better works< Dr Ram! Brilliantly written! Just for the History of it Byron died at Messologi ( 19 April 1824)a town that my family comes from, during the Greek revolution. I am certain that my great-great-grandfather who was fighting there at the time had seen him! A seven!
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January 21, 2015 at 2:49 PM
An amazing poem Ram. I have not read a poem like this. The reason, perhaps is, that I have been missing out your work lately as I have not been a visitor to poetrysoup for sometime. I intend to remove this lapse in order to benefit from your brilliant thoughts. -Mohammad
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