Please walk me into your city

Please walk me into your City 

Rain down on me with your love
As I walk down in your city with your liquid flesh touching my feet 
Light up my heart like fire flies with yellow flowers above my feet 
My hat is tilled, acknowledge me
As my white dress adores you to speak 
The sky is lit by the moon while the lamps smiles brightly when you walk past, walk me to my destiny. Welcome me to
your city
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Perry Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 5:41 PM
Please don’t put that in my comments. I’m traumatized from the word Jesus and I don’t want to see a bible verse containing to a begotten son of Jesus; it’s scary enough people call me Jesus already I would appreciate it if you left that as is and not In my comments thank you. Have a blessed day.
Agustin Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 1:40 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Hi Perry. Please check your Soup Mail. Su
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October 16, 2025 at 12:43 AM
Please see under the "Soup Mail" option on your "My Admin Home" (the icon on top or the page that looks like a pawn in chess) and go to the "Inbox". I will never reference a discussion (especially not share a Soup Mail - it is forbidden by PS rules anyway) on a blog. Regards, Su
Perry Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Hey what’s up Su; I did check, I didn’t see anything about our previous conversation on your blog. I was only led to this one here.
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