Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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Please Take a Moment

~Please, Take A Moment~
(Free Verse) 

  
Please,take just a moment 
To breath in deep, the fresh air 
To smell sometimes all the roses 
That you may find or see on your way.

Pause,take just ....a moment 
Spare just a minute of your time, 
Don't take anything more for granted 
Smell the coffee,sit back and relax. 

Look again,to all the beauty around you! 
Enjoy sometimes, all the view 
Get in touch with God and the real you, 
Waste no more time life is too short, just for that. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladyDP2000 
copyright@2002



December, 15,2014

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Perry Mcdaid December 16, 2014 at 3:33 PM I love your poetic voice. "Take a moment" are the keywords here. It could even stand as a poem on itself - a cobla. Dorian Petersen Potter December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM Hi Perry! Thank you dear friend for stopping by to visit me once more and for your awesome comments. You're far too kind, thanks for your compliments. Glad you do Perry.Much appreciated. Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen December 15, 2014 at 7:59 PM Very interesting this poem,waste no more time....thanks for sharing dear poet,Potter.Wishes and love. - Safa Dorian Petersen Potter December 15, 2014 at 8:25 PM Thank you so much Safa for your very wonderful comments and all. Much appreciated. And a very Merry Christmas to you and yours! xxx D.