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Please Stop Wars

Please stop wars......

Oh my God, please stop war in this world
and bless us to live in this world peacefully
No one wants war in any part of this world
nor no one wants to live with strife with anyone
The pain and suffering of our innocent people cannot be spoken
nor cannot be count their sorrowful death
The stubborn world leaders live with safe and secure
but the innocent people are dying for nothing
The war brings not only destruction and diseases
but also death of innocent human beings
Our hearts are broken when we see so many families mourn
and cry for loved ones while crocodile tears shed by some leaders
Life cannot be brought back but why did they die for?
The white dove’s wing has been cut into two pieces
and the name of peace has been written with human blood
The destruction of weapons are become human’s safety tools
and cultivated lands are become playground of war
Oh my God, please help our world and bring PEACE.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Arturo Michael Date: 4/17/2019 2:47:00 PM Amen...Let there be peace... Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/3/2019 5:27:00 PM Yes Ravi, your sentiments are those of so many, yet throughout history, the human race as searched battled and fought for peace, in their time,,yet there is always someone that want to stuff it up, one only as to be here on soup to know that, Love the poem so well constructed,,and to the point... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:04:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/30/2019 8:18:00 PM Love this, Ravi. Sadly, some powerful men are leading young men astray in this world and teaching them hate. Terrorism is a big part of wars today and it's all so sad. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:04:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Ralph Sergi Date: 3/30/2019 1:47:00 PM We need a universal prayer to end war and what it portends. Your expression of prayer against War is sincere. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:04:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Silent One Date: 3/30/2019 1:12:00 PM If only it was so simple.. power and ego seem to rule.. great poem Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:04:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Eve Roper Date: 3/28/2019 8:03:00 PM Vey well written poem, Ravi. A prayer I am always praying for, like you my emotions are the same as yours. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/28/2019 4:11:00 PM Very expressive work on the topic of unnecessary war and blood shed of all young people in the world. Only when Jesus returns to earth will there be peace for until then there shall be wars and rumors of wars. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/28/2019 2:47:00 PM ravi, a blessed devotional which pleads for peace in the world... how much we all need this... huhhs Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2019 2:21:00 PM - A beautiful prayer, Ravi ... but, the world needs more than prayers ... burn all weapons ... we need honest and skilled people to lead the people on earth ... not people who want to build walls - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 3/28/2019 2:19:00 PM An Amen to conclude you prayer/poem, Ravi. Wars bring only tragic deaths, pain and suffering. Unfortunately, hate, politics and greed are determined to eradicate peace. Only love can save the world! Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/28/2019 11:28:00 AM This is beautifully written Ravi. I so agree. War brings pain and sorrow, not peace. When many unite for the sake of peace the world can change, but as you said it begins at the top with leaders who put greed above life. Blessings my friend. : ) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:05:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/28/2019 10:01:00 AM A beautiful message of peace so well written dear, Ravi! Unfortunately many people want and wish for war my friend! Look around you and you will see all these warmongers waiting t devour the peace loving people! If only all could see the word as you do! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:06:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 7:31:00 AM I share the sentiments you express in this poem..wars don't really achieve..what peace can..well said, Ravi. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/10/2019 6:06:00 AM Thank you very much my friend for your comment. Appreciated.