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Please Step Away, Mrs Clinton Premiere Contest Winner

I’m so sorry… Hillary, but it is nothing personal, And in saying this I am also merciful, But with a bounty on your head, Your campaign is dead, And for that, I am truly thankful. You see… I am happy to see women held high, But for you, that just does not apply. You don’t seem naive, So my biggest pet peeve, Is why you stood by your husband. To me… When someone accepts such an indignity, It leads me to believe they have malignity. I’m not one to judge, But if you're capable of such, Then I think we're better off without you. It’s not you… It’s your attachment to Bill, Just doesn’t seem right for Capitol Hill. It makes you seem suspect, And since we're on the subject, Can we mention Travelgate? I mean… Were you pulling strings behind the curtains? Of course, nothing we know for certain. Except beneath that smile, We sense something is vile, Why don’t you just give it a break? It’s sad… Because it’s hard to tell who’s really cheating When most of your ideas are very misleading, Conspiracies of so much deceit, It has all ended in your defeat, And will continue again and again. So please, Hillary, won’t you please listen, Our country, it grows in division, Humiliation you'll save yourself from, Because corruptions not welcome In a country that we are trying to change. ———————————————— May, 2, 2019 A Realistic Hillary Clinton Poem (It is NOT positive) Contest Sponser: Michael Wegman

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Date: 5/14/2019 1:07:00 PM
I find it very sad and I also have never understood the Hillary bashing aside from that it was the right side of the aisle's only way they could see to beat her in the election. All of the accusations, she has sat in court and answered. All that being said, you have a wonderful gift for writing prose. I just hope you use it for more constructive endeavors in the future. And congrats on your win. :) <3
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 1:51:00 PM
Sorry for the VERY long reply, I just had a lot to say. (: XOXO -Briauna
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 1:49:00 PM
Hmm, where to start? Like I said in a previous reply, I'm not fond of ANY of the candidates running. None of them seem to have a middle ground and I don't think the current government has our best interest in mind. I neither love nor hate Hillary so writing this indeed a bit of a challenge. I cannot find positive proof of any of the larger accusations that people are quick to point out so I went based off of how *I* feel about her, her relationships and endeavors.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 1:49:00 PM
I joined Poetry Soup to help push my thoughts outside of my comfort zone, seeing as how the contest themes spark my creativity and force me to try writing styles and topics that I wouldn't otherwise do. Writing a political poem (especially about HRC) was never at the top of my list, or on it for that matter but sometimes your best writings come from controversial topics, even one that may irritate your own self. Oh, and this was a VERY constructive endeavor seeing as how it help me pay a bill! ;) Thank you for your comment! I appreciate your insight!
Date: 5/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
'Briauna, Congratulations on your win! You have captured Hillary well without locking her up. David'
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 5/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful satire, Brian And done so elegantly , politely and finally. Will the next female nominee want play her own song. I'm not political but I would vote for any female. I have 3 daughters. Congratulations!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/14/2019 12:56:00 AM
I'm not much into politics as well and personally cannot stand any of the candidates, there is no middle ground. Thank you for your comment!!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL SATIRE, BRIAUNA...
Date: 5/9/2019 5:23:00 PM
AWESOME! Congrats on your win.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/9/2019 6:12:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/9/2019 2:41:00 PM
Briauna, I say to you, congratulations on your 1st place win. And, welcome to Poetry Soup from me to you!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/9/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, thank you! I'm happy to be here!
Date: 5/9/2019 1:34:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!!!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/9/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you! Caught me completely off guard! So very happy and proud! Exactly the pick-me-up that I needed! Thank you!
Date: 5/4/2019 6:46:00 PM
Well thought out and expressed! Good luck is earned. Aloha! Rico
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/3/2019 9:12:00 AM
Check those contest boxes, Briauna! Realistic? -- Check. Not positive? -- check... Unlovable and Unelectable?! -- Check-Check. Nicely done poem? -- Check. ... Welcome to Poetry Soup. Write on! Best wishes, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2019 1:49:00 PM
Hey! Not only did you check all the boxes, you won the whole contest!! Good for you!! Congrats, Briauna. ~ Gershon
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thank you!!!

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