Please Say Something

Two hearts in an awesome communication but covered by bodies which are worshipers of denial. She adores him, he cherishes her but such feelings are molded into the formality of colleagues. Excitement, no matter how little, is suppressed, appreciation rendered from a falling heart but by casual lips; attraction, pressures the borders of the mind through its swell but yet restricted by the protective bunkers of pretense. When the time for absence to ease the saga comes, anticipation drafts out a time table for expectation to put every event on alarm in both souls which cling to the thoughts of the next reunion. Ego strips to perform a show on affectionate longing; he becomes the gold standard to her new lifestyle while she becomes the detergent to which his actions are washed. Time once again takes a shift from itself, internal body signals responding to a meeting, soon to occur. Face to face, the physical acquaintance is once more blessed but the corresponding fever has now began to snore, weakening the whiskers of attraction to stay down. Executive in the outside, voracious in the inside with longing spirits towards each other but confined by dramatized strictness. Static and fixed concentration but away from her from the guy with concrete rigidity lasting for long-long minutes. Expert carefulness and planned accuracy in body movements from the lady with continuous episodes of deep exhales coming out of tension’s internal burning sticks. Avoiding each other’s gazes with admiration’s lips tightly sealed epitomizing an atmosphere of two minds in one likeness, yet standing as agents of discomfort to each other. Heat has unnecessarily been added to a delicacy so spicy and nothing can blow it out unless someone says something.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/12/2016 10:44:00 AM
well written Funom...
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thank you so much White Sage
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