Angelita Becerra Poet Rhyme

Please Listen

Please listen to me,
For I'm crying out in pain
As you begin to see,
That my life is not the same.
Listen to my voice,
And hear what is not said.
I am given no choice,
I follow where I'm lead.
 
Please listen to my tone,
Understand what I need.
For I am all alone,
As I continue to bleed.
Can you not comprehend?
That I need to be saved.
As my will bends,
In my walls cave.
 
Please listen to my plea,
Or my life will be lost.
As you take my Sanity,
I hope its worth the cost.
You have taken me from my shell,
And laid bare my emotions.
You watched as I fell,
Face void of all devotion.
 
Please listen...Please listen to me.

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Angelita Becerra April 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM this one seems to get the most comments....i would like to personally thank all of you that have left cooments and mail...your words inspire me to keep writing anf help me to improve and grow as a writer...so thank you one and all your sentiments are much appreciated.

Kelly Zakerski March 20, 2010 at 4:26 AM CONGRATULATIONS on such an awesome, deep poem. Although it's sad, it pulls at the heartstrings. Keep up the great writing. Regards, Kelly

Skat A March 18, 2010 at 2:06 PM Congratulations!!A wonderful job. A serious poem. I like the deepness in your poem...

Carol Sunshine Brown March 17, 2010 at 7:10 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week angelita. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff March 14, 2010 at 11:26 PM NIce poem. Congratulations on this feaured poetry.

James Fraser October 26, 2009 at 8:55 AM Lovely, but sad rhyme Angelita >> thank you for your kind comments on " She was Saved " >> James

Dion Bess October 25, 2009 at 2:58 PM all the poems that i read you could feel the pain in it keep it up