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Please Leave Me In Lala Land

My hearts dream is alert, awake, but cannot coax my body into even a dull eye blink. My hearts goals are just beyond my reach, I am in lala land, and I want to stay there. My hearts song is now allowing me to move even a muscle, as I try to recapture my dream. The dog nudges my leg again, wanting to get up, smelling bacon I do not care about or eat UGH! It is a Tuesday. I throw my pillow at my annoying alarm. I almost had it this time.

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 12/18/2018 2:10:00 PM

You will make it to LaLa Land one day, Caren. I think we all can relate to this time and time again. Putting it to verse, well done.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/7/2019 12:27:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. I do believe I am in LaLa Lands in my dreams often.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2018 10:38:00 AM

Oh I dont miss those days at all, thank god I retired. I'm always in lala land.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/18/2018 10:40:00 AM

If I was retired, what on earth would I have to write about? You do realize all my good material is walking around me at a different level on two legs.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

It won't do any good, I must've hit and knocked my alarm clock in the floor 50 times already and it still screams at me every morning. Those things don't die anymore. Cute.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/18/2018 10:40:00 AM

I try though; always.