Please Leave Me In Lala Land

My hearts dream is alert, awake,
but cannot coax my body 
into even a dull eye blink.

My hearts goals are just
beyond my reach, I am
in lala land, and I want to
stay there.

My hearts song is now
allowing me to move even
a muscle, as I try to
recapture my dream.

The dog nudges my leg
again, wanting to get up,
smelling bacon I do not
care about or eat

UGH! It is a Tuesday.
I throw my pillow at
my annoying alarm.

I almost had it this time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/18/2018 2:10:00 PM
You will make it to LaLa Land one day, Caren. I think we all can relate to this time and time again. Putting it to verse, well done.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/7/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. I do believe I am in LaLa Lands in my dreams often.
Date: 12/18/2018 10:38:00 AM
Oh I dont miss those days at all, thank god I retired. I'm always in lala land.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/18/2018 10:40:00 AM
If I was retired, what on earth would I have to write about? You do realize all my good material is walking around me at a different level on two legs.
Date: 12/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
It won't do any good, I must've hit and knocked my alarm clock in the floor 50 times already and it still screams at me every morning. Those things don't die anymore. Cute.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/18/2018 10:40:00 AM
I try though; always.
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