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Please Leave

(17/08/2011)

Harshing
Mocking
Wishing
Leaving
I recalled you’re harshing by mocking
In my mind I’m wishing you’re leaving

For Dr. Ram' 'Tyburn' contest

Copyright © Dinda Minardi | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 26, 2011 at 8:13 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2011 at 11:32 PM

Congratulations, Dinda. Love that last line!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 25, 2011 at 11:08 PM

Congrats Dinda on your winning poem in Tyburn contest luv...

August 25, 2011 at 10:14 PM

Nice idea, Dinda. Quite neat, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

August 25, 2011 at 6:16 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest,Dinda

Michael J. Falotico

August 22, 2011 at 4:39 PM

Right on target with this piece my dear friend.... i love it!! luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A

August 19, 2011 at 1:39 AM

oooo ! I love it alll....... thanks D.M., once again... mocking says it all,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2011 at 11:28 PM

I love that last line. I would be wishing that too, Dinda!!

August 17, 2011 at 8:31 PM

Thanks for the entry, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 17, 2011 at 2:29 PM

great write Dinda.. like the way the rhyming words join in the theme and the last two lines are perfection ..good luck in the contest luv..

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