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(17/08/2011) Harshing Mocking Wishing Leaving I recalled you’re harshing by mocking In my mind I’m wishing you’re leaving For Dr. Ram' 'Tyburn' contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2011 11:32:00 PM

Congratulations, Dinda. Love that last line!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2011 11:08:00 PM

Congrats Dinda on your winning poem in Tyburn contest luv...

John Freeman

Date: 8/25/2011 10:14:00 PM

Nice idea, Dinda. Quite neat, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2011 6:16:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest,Dinda

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/22/2011 4:39:00 PM

Right on target with this piece my dear friend.... i love it!! luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2011 1:39:00 AM

oooo ! I love it alll....... thanks D.M., once again... mocking says it all,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2011 11:28:00 PM

I love that last line. I would be wishing that too, Dinda!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2011 8:31:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2011 2:29:00 PM

great write Dinda.. like the way the rhyming words join in the theme and the last two lines are perfection ..good luck in the contest luv..