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Please Help Me

I hear a rapping on my window, Ting, ting, Ting, ting. Theres a banging on my door, Tap, tap, Tap, tap. My phone is ringing off the wall, Clang, clang, Clang, clang. But I can't answer them, Because I'm dead, Dead inside. Please help me.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 8:12:00 PM

Kristy Berg, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 11:04:00 PM

KRISTY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 7/21/2011 10:47:00 AM

Wow that is not where I seen your poem directed at all. BUT i enjoyed the twist at the end and I hope that you were being metaphorical to make a piece of literature. But if you were not than I am sorry and hope that you find what ever it is that makes you feel alive soon. Great write, love Roxy(: