Please Help Me

I hear a rapping on my window,
Ting, ting,
Ting, ting.

Theres a banging on my door,
Tap, tap,
Tap, tap.

My phone is ringing off the wall,
Clang, clang,
Clang, clang.

But I can't answer them,
Because I'm dead,
Dead inside.

Please help me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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March 28, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Kristy Berg, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 10, 2015 at 11:04 PM
KRISTY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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July 21, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Wow that is not where I seen your poem directed at all. BUT i enjoyed the twist at the end and I hope that you were being metaphorical to make a piece of literature. But if you were not than I am sorry and hope that you find what ever it is that makes you feel alive soon. Great write, love Roxy(:
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