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Please Forgive Me

Her own words Rang In her ears Nothing would Ever stop the pain The words were said The error made Regret upon regret Could never be undone Moment of truth Lie upon lie Laid to rest With these simple words PLEASE FORGIVE ME...................

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Rockman Pritts

Date: 7/14/2011 9:50:00 PM

Good write Laura Ann. You speak the truth. The word regret can only follow words said or unsaid. The same goes for the word sorry. When the mouth precedes the brain, the heart is left to sort it out. Thanks for making me think. Rockman :-)

Laura Ann
Date: 7/14/2011 9:53:00 PM

So True ..... and GUILTY! But....Thank YOU!

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/14/2011 9:18:00 PM

Lovely poem. Lee

Laura Ann
Date: 7/14/2011 9:21:00 PM

Thank You!