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Please Forgive

Loudly and quietly, I cry Making things work, I must try But nothing works Pain and anger are what lurks Loosing slowly I lose the will to live And if I kill myself, please forgive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/8/2018 8:15:00 AM
I am hoping these are just poetic words. Don’t give up. Just like you don’t know what beauty lies around the corner, same is true of your life.
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Sayonara Oyasumi
Date: 6/8/2018 10:36:00 AM
:'). Thank you. Actually just going through a very bad stage. So i channel my sorrow by writing. I'll be just fine. Thanks

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