Please Forgive

Loudly and quietly, I cry 
Making things work, I must try
But nothing works
Pain and anger are what lurks
Loosing slowly I lose the will to live
And if I kill myself, please forgive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:15 AM
I am hoping these are just poetic words. Don’t give up. Just like you don’t know what beauty lies around the corner, same is true of your life.
Oyasumi Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 10:36 AM
:'). Thank you. Actually just going through a very bad stage. So i channel my sorrow by writing. I'll be just fine. Thanks
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