Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

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I know not everybody in this world is evil,so please dont take that the wrong way.
It's some of the things I see in life just scare me! So I feel all I can do is pray. 

Please Don'T Condemn Me

Please don't condemn me
For whom or how I pray
I sadly pray for the souls of all others
That I come across every day

I pray wholeheartedly with the feelings,
That are felt from within my heart
Also for those who think of themselves above me
As they arrogantly rip my heart apart

This world has become such an evil place
Cloked in nothing but selfish greed
So to those I can reach,I try to do one thing
And that is plant a new spiritual seed

So please don't condemn me
For whom or how I pray
I sadly pray for the souls of all others
Before my life here is to be taken away



Dan Kearley:12-4-12

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Debbie Duncan December 31, 2012 at 8:13 PM Nicely done Dan,,,, you and yours have a blessed New Year ;}

Charmaine Chircop December 21, 2012 at 6:58 AM Awesome inspiring poetry Dan.

Debbie Duncan December 15, 2012 at 10:40 PM nice words you got up there ,,,, yes I pray for people I see broke down, or homeless, or ?

Kerry Singleton December 11, 2012 at 3:54 PM Oh Dan, I can relate to this so much, I too pray for love & peace as this world spins out of control with evil, Bless you my friend another great write :)

Seren Roberts December 10, 2012 at 8:08 PM I liked the for whom and how i pray line, so important , doesnt matter where as long as we do....Seren

Cindy Cayton December 7, 2012 at 12:49 PM I am so there with you on this write. it really hurts I know how it is oh, so well.... Just love how you put it out there with such a flowing poem. Your simplicity of word usage is why I have ALWAYS enjoyed reading you, and btw, in re: me either (facebook) you can google [cindy cayton Blueberry Jam] to get a free preview, and got my bragging rights just with you, unbelievable, I got the autor spotlight. You can check that out too! (well I did kind of in the excitment blurt it to Frank @soup

Holly Moore December 7, 2012 at 12:10 PM Wow..that is really beautiful. It gave me the chills. If you can, read my "Don't Understand" poem and tell me what I'm supposed to do? It's far down my list...Thanks for adding my poem to your fav list! Holly Moore

Carl Fraser December 7, 2012 at 9:53 AM This is so good Dan, remember, "There is therefore no condemnation for those in Christ Jesus, if he doesnt then no one else has the right, very nice my friend. Love the Zappa Look,blessings, Carl

Harry Horsman December 7, 2012 at 8:50 AM how could one Dan, with beautiful poetry like this,,,

Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2012 at 3:29 PM Wow Dan! What an ausome prayer. I really appreciate what you have written.

The Situation December 6, 2012 at 1:31 PM i don't know who you worship but if he says we should live like brothers. then he is the one you should pray to.

Bukang Liwayway December 5, 2012 at 10:01 AM excellent write my friend Dan...i like it..thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by on my poem..Good day!! :)

Shaz Cheesman December 5, 2012 at 6:09 AM Well u r just a very special soul Dan and clearly u have a wonderful heart. Well written and great flow:-)

David Williams December 5, 2012 at 2:33 AM Dan, very well said, like the new pic...David

Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2012 at 2:16 AM We should respect all religions! - We have no right to judge others! - A well written poem my dear Dan. - In December, I believe in Santa Claus! - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala December 5, 2012 at 2:14 AM very inspiring write..thank you Dan for sharing you kindness <3<3<3 enjoy reading this so much :)SK

Seren Roberts December 5, 2012 at 1:50 AM What you are saying is so right. Lovely read Dan.....Seren