Greg Gaul Poet Light Verse

Please Do Not Disturb

Pardon, this dream was taken
If I am not mistaken
Fast asleep, I was shaken
What a fuss they were makin
Promise, I was not fakin
My little world was quakin
Gently now, let me awaken

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Panagiota Romios July 5, 2020 at 4:25 PM Belated Congratulatins Greg. Panagiota Greg Gaul July 5, 2020 at 6:51 PM Never too late to be kind as you have always been. Thank you for your gracious visits.

Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 3:03 AM That's such a relevant experience. I always feel like going back to a dream and directing it after I've woken up. Congratulations on your win Greg :) Greg Gaul June 17, 2020 at 6:01 AM Aditi, you have notable imagination skills witnessed by your fine recent placements. Direct those dreams into powerful poetry. Thanks so much for your visit and cogent commentary.

Greg Gaul June 16, 2020 at 3:55 PM Connie, great to have you comment. Not everyone can return to a dream but you have some amazing talents to be sure. Thanks so much for commenting on my little ditty. Such fun.

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2020 at 3:19 PM I really dislike it when someone calls or wakes me from a great dream. Once in a great while I can go right back to the dream but usually I can’t. I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo Greg Gaul June 16, 2020 at 3:58 PM Connie, great to have you comment. Not everyone can return to a dream but you have some amazing talents to be sure. Thanks so much for commenting on my little ditty. Such fun.

Carolyn Devonshire June 16, 2020 at 1:32 PM Very nicely done, Greg. Competition was very steep, so congrats on your placement in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn Greg Gaul June 16, 2020 at 1:40 PM Carolyn, your visit is so welcome. My little ditty was just a bitty thing, so thanks for including it with the big guns. What a nice contest and so gracious a host! Namaste.