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Please Do Not Disturb

Pardon, this dream was taken If I am not mistaken Fast asleep, I was shaken What a fuss they were makin Promise, I was not fakin My little world was quakin Gently now, let me awaken

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/5/2020 4:25:00 PM

Belated Congratulatins Greg. Panagiota

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/5/2020 6:51:00 PM

Never too late to be kind as you have always been. Thank you for your gracious visits.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 3:03:00 AM

That's such a relevant experience. I always feel like going back to a dream and directing it after I've woken up. Congratulations on your win Greg :)

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/17/2020 6:01:00 AM

Aditi, you have notable imagination skills witnessed by your fine recent placements. Direct those dreams into powerful poetry. Thanks so much for your visit and cogent commentary.

Greg Gaul

Date: 6/16/2020 3:55:00 PM

Connie, great to have you comment. Not everyone can return to a dream but you have some amazing talents to be sure. Thanks so much for commenting on my little ditty. Such fun.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2020 3:19:00 PM

I really dislike it when someone calls or wakes me from a great dream. Once in a great while I can go right back to the dream but usually I can’t. I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/16/2020 3:58:00 PM

Connie, great to have you comment. Not everyone can return to a dream but you have some amazing talents to be sure. Thanks so much for commenting on my little ditty. Such fun.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2020 1:32:00 PM

Very nicely done, Greg. Competition was very steep, so congrats on your placement in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/16/2020 1:40:00 PM

Carolyn, your visit is so welcome. My little ditty was just a bitty thing, so thanks for including it with the big guns. What a nice contest and so gracious a host! Namaste.