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Last night, I dreamt of you, You were so close to me, I could feel your rhythmic breath. I was blessed to look straight into your eyes. I touched you for the very first time. I felt your presence lighting up my vivid dream. I held you tight with a strong force just to not let you go and I am sorry if it did hurt you. Finally, I could love you with all my heart….abundant all that has been locked deep inside before, Because we were just like two lost puzzle pieces with different shapes but with the right colours. But I am scared that you will just remain as a dream. Today, I was stopped by the airport security police because I am not your family they claimed but trust me baby, I could give you a lot more. But you vanished just like my dream, vanished together with the beast sky plane!! My heart is burning, fires of frustrations and disappointments are cloaking my mind!! I am sick of chasing sleep these days. I am yearning for an answer that could ignite back hopes. I am afraid to look on any news; everything is just tearing me alive! I wish it is never too late to at least let my feelings known. I hope it is never too late… Please come back.. I beg.

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:14:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Devisri :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2014 5:14:00 PM
Hi Devisri, I hope you get the answer your heart is searching for. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/28/2014 3:40:00 PM
Devisri, well expressed heart felt emotions. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Devisri Subramaniam
Date: 3/28/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thanks and im glad to read your comment =) thanks again for the support and contest invitation, will check it out right now!

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