Pleasant Pain

Asunder have all my classical forms and themes been torn,
Who tore them?
Who destroyed them to bring the poem down to the earth? 
Yes, I did.
It is I who is now cold like a fully unthawed polar ocean,
No longer a wrathful wrangler,
No longer bold.
The neatly shaped rhyme and rhythm of verse is now 
Like a frail vase, clasped by a frailer fist,
Falls only to get smashed on the floor 
To sharp smithereens.
When undaunted I trotted upon them,
Found my feet hued with
Beautiful stains of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Such interesting verse! The freedom to experiment. I love "sharp smithereens"
Bhattacharya Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Thank you for dropping by and appreciating me, Kim.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 11:25 PM
I like the title..the contrast and the write. Good luck with your writes Sarban. I enjoyed this one. X]
Bhattacharya Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 5:13 AM
Oh I see, Sunita! Thank you for dropping by.
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Nice ... May the pain get a mountain ... May fountains issue too ...
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for appreciation ..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace