Pleasant Jaunt

pleasant jaunt
the invisible line I cross
and lose an hour
           ~
symmetry of curve
the face of beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 8:00 PM
I really like the tone of this one too.
Henderson Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 5:10 PM
But, being a crochetity old man, I was really writing about a long slow curve in the mountains and actually crossing the time zone
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November 16, 2012 at 5:12 PM
I KNOW you believed that. heeahhhhhaaaaa
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November 16, 2012 at 5:07 PM
The invisible line could be her attitude??? That last little bit of freedom she allowed before you got slapped.
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