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Pleasant Jaunt

pleasant jaunt the invisible line I cross and lose an hour ~ symmetry of curve the face of beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2013 8:00:00 PM
I really like the tone of this one too.
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Date: 11/16/2012 5:10:00 PM
But, being a crochetity old man, I was really writing about a long slow curve in the mountains and actually crossing the time zone
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Charles Henderson
Date: 11/16/2012 5:12:00 PM
I KNOW you believed that. heeahhhhhaaaaa
Date: 11/16/2012 5:07:00 PM
The invisible line could be her attitude??? That last little bit of freedom she allowed before you got slapped.
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