Pleasant Hearts

Father dont relieve me 
give me a dawning day to
kiss the bliss upon a new life
as long as i take them with
me into what could be 6 plus deep
just fall into what could be heaven
for me it is called hell
as if i were to sieze the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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