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Pleasant Domain

She lived alone in her domain, Recited and danced with great height, Beneath the gentle blossoms leaves rain, Sans approaching in anyone's sight. She was very shy, But her placidity and fortes was high. Her liberty was beyond imagination, She was not a part of this sinful creation. She ruled on every path, mountains and trees. None can stop her to dancing, Neither the heavy mizzle nor the tough breeze. But, One day many foreigners arrived. They started drinking, smoking, creating bars, And seized her holy land, But then, her bravery made her stand. Till the last breathe, she battled very hard, But eventually they ripped her apart. - Augastus Black Date - 18th June 2015

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Date: 9/3/2017 5:43:00 PM
I found this poem to be sad. I hope you had a good summer. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:11:00 AM
Tribute to Gaia, is nice!
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Date: 5/4/2016 12:20:00 PM
Well comosed. Congrats Augustus
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Date: 5/3/2016 9:53:00 PM
You did an amazing job, skat
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:33:00 AM
Augastus Black, now this is poetry.... Love it. LINDA
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