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Playing With Words Under Fire

i faint
tiles fall on me
bury me

words like star-floaters
i pop
but less shaky hands sizzle-scintillate

those hands arrange and rearrange
bittersweet flowers and baby’s breath

the rapid eye movement of a painter’s gun
passionate splotches
cover me before i blink sos

one serendipitous word
sensational bonus of fifty points
neon sign euphoriants — i lift

my opponent cheats
teases my tiles
through skeletal-fingers
rattling me

places them in a line
flicks her pointer
and the dominoes
tumble and turn

the dictionary and thesaurus bluster
until they lose their breath
my face burns

9/29/2018
Contest sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/8/2018 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your win. What a splendid play of words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 10/6/2018 1:19:00 PM
Well penned, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 10/5/2018 3:30:00 PM
A Kaleidoscope of colors in this playful entry Kim, beautifully blend together! Congratulations on your wonderful Second Placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 10/5/2018 1:47:00 PM
Kim, what can I say? I loved this poem so much! The play on words astounding as usual, my friend. This contest was such a great surprise when I pressed FINALIZE and saw so many familiar names!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2018 2:02:00 PM
That’s my favorite part too! Always fun to see who won. Thank you so much, sweet Caren!
Date: 10/5/2018 11:53:00 AM
Well done Kim, congratulations on your win, Have a great day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie!

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