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Playing With Wings

Rabble of butterflies, fluttering on. Bluish beauty, come to me. Touch me, Missed! Missed, my kiss. Play with me, sing my soft purr, Roll with blissful wind's gentle euouae. Date of Entry : 16-08-2020 Photo selected : 3 Contest : Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Sponsor : Eve Roper

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/28/2020 2:41:00 AM

Flying back to you with my heartily Congratulations dear Jenish sir:-) I believe your keeping well.. Take care.Warm regards sent to you.:-)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 9/7/2020 10:31:00 PM

Thank you Deepa for your kind support.. Have a great day..

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2020 8:58:00 AM

Thank you so much for participating in the contest, Jenish, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 9/7/2020 10:30:00 PM

Thank you Eve for my placement and your wonderful contest.. Have a great day..

John Watt

Date: 8/19/2020 9:37:00 AM

Lovely imagery in your poem, Jenish. Enjoyed learning a new word, euouae, which you used to perfection. Best wishes in the double tetractys contest ~ John

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/19/2020 9:26:00 PM

Thank you John.. I'm delighted to read your comments..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 4:47:00 PM

Ahhh, this is so sweet. Purrr-fect

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/18/2020 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..

V. Deepa

Date: 8/18/2020 3:00:00 AM

Wow, Jenish sir, Enjoyed your delightful Muse.:-) Roll with blissful wind's gentle "euouae"~ Thankyou, learnt a new word from you..!! Keep writing and inspiring us:-)Good luck for the contest.Am sure,it's a win!!:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Warm regards:-)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/18/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thank you Deepa for your kind support and comment.. Your words are an inspiration..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/16/2020 2:31:00 PM

By the power that no sane person would ever invest in me, I hereby give you 'Word of the Week' for that last word there, my friend! :) U-O-E

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/16/2020 8:30:00 PM

Lol..Word of the week..I appreciate my friend..much sweeter than the POTW..lol..Thanks..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/16/2020 8:40:00 AM

Loved the playful tone--a charming write, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/16/2020 8:24:00 PM

Thank you Vijay..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/16/2020 6:58:00 AM

Delightful writing, very fitting for the occasion . Good luck dearest, Jenish. Good luck.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/16/2020 8:23:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios.. Have a great day..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2020 4:33:00 AM

- Beautifully described, Jenish:) - I chose the same picture :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/16/2020 5:20:00 AM

Thank you Anne.. Good luck to you also..